[seahorse/wip/userdocs: 367/433] Modify keyring-lock.page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 994890a6ee11cb33cba25319872ec439fa21ae87
Author: Aruna Sankaranarayanan <arunasank src gnome org>
Date:   Mon Sep 2 19:38:42 2013 +0530

    Modify keyring-lock.page
    
    Make steps concise, shorten explanation.

 help/C/keyring-lock.page |   20 +++++++++-----------
 1 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/keyring-lock.page b/help/C/keyring-lock.page
index 338157f..e08a6bd 100644
--- a/help/C/keyring-lock.page
+++ b/help/C/keyring-lock.page
@@ -22,16 +22,14 @@
 
   <title>Control access to your passwords.</title>
 
-  <p>To keep your passwords secure, you can control access to the password
-  keyring which contains them. This can be done by using a password-protected
-  keyring to store the password. When a password-protected keyring is locked,
-  the passwords in it are kept hidden till someone
-  <link xref="keyring-unlock">unlocks</link> the keyring with the
-  correct password.</p>
+  <p>To safe-keep your passwords, store them in a password-protected keyring.
+  When a password-protected keyring is locked, the passwords in it are kept
+  hidden till someone <link xref="keyring-unlock">unlocks</link> the keyring
+  with the correct password.</p>
 
   <note style="tip">
-    <p>You can choose whether or not to protect your keyring with a password
-    while <link xref="keyring-create">creating</link> it.</p>
+    <p>You can choose to protect your keyring with a password while
+    <link xref="keyring-create">creating</link> it.</p>
   </note>
 
   <steps>
@@ -40,9 +38,9 @@
       <p>Select the keyring of your choice from the list.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Right click on the selected keyring and select <gui>Lock</gui> or
-      click the small picture of an opened lock next to the name of the
-      password keyring. This will lock the keyring.</p>
+      <p>Right click on the selected keyring and select <gui>Lock</gui>, or
+      click on the small picture of an opened lock next to the name of the
+      password keyring.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>