[seahorse/wip/userdocs: 320/423] Reworded about-key-servers.page



commit 5f12b26d8abf2b8fdf0f05b3b797f80c0acaf812
Author: Aruna Sankaranarayanan <arunasank src gnome org>
Date:   Wed Aug 21 19:12:06 2013 +0530

    Reworded about-key-servers.page

 help/C/about-key-servers.page |   11 ++++-------
 1 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/about-key-servers.page b/help/C/about-key-servers.page
index ed12e8e..68183c8 100644
--- a/help/C/about-key-servers.page
+++ b/help/C/about-key-servers.page
@@ -25,12 +25,9 @@
 
   <p>Key servers are computers that store public encryption keys, and share
   copies of them with other key servers. When you create a new public key you
-  can submit it to a key server via the Internet. When you do this, the key
-  server stores your public key and also shares it with other key servers. This
-  makes it easy for people to <link xref="misc-key-import">import</link> your
-  public key from any key server and use it to encrypt and send files and
-  messages to you. Every key server can be accessed through an Internet
-  address(URL) which can be used to submit or import public keys.</p>
+  can submit it to a key server using the Internet. This makes it easy for
+  people to <link xref="misc-key-import">import</link> your public key from any
+  key server and use it.</p>
 
   <p><app>Passwords and Keys</app> provides you an interface to
   <link xref="pgp-publish">publish</link> your public keys or to
@@ -51,7 +48,7 @@
   </list>
 
   <note style="info">
-    <p>You can also add key servers of your choice to
+    <p>You can add key servers of your choice to
     <app>Passwords and Keys</app>.</p>
   </note>
 


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