[seahorse/wip/userdocs: 354/423] Modify passwords-stored-create.page



commit 19247c6ba50124691be748b6b3c2fa25dc9c4d72
Author: Aruna Sankaranarayanan <arunasank src gnome org>
Date:   Sun Sep 1 21:24:22 2013 +0530

    Modify passwords-stored-create.page
    
    Edit page, shorten steps etc.

 help/C/passwords-stored-create.page |   10 +++++-----
 1 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/passwords-stored-create.page b/help/C/passwords-stored-create.page
index ef46bef..c1e9ca1 100644
--- a/help/C/passwords-stored-create.page
+++ b/help/C/passwords-stored-create.page
@@ -32,16 +32,16 @@
       <gui style="menuitem">New…</gui></guiseq>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>From the list, select <gui>Stored Password</gui> and press
+      <p>Select <gui>Stored Password</gui> from the list and press
       <gui style="button">Continue</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>From the <gui>Keyring</gui> menu, select the
-      password keyring in which you want to store your password.</p>
+      <p>Select the password keyring in which you want to store your password
+      from the <gui>Keyring</gui> menu.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>In the <gui>Description</gui> field, you can add additional
-      information about the password like the date of creation, or the name of
+      <p>You can add additional information about the password in the
+      <gui>Description</gui> field, like the date of creation, or the name of
       the application it protects, etc.</p>
     </item>
     <item>


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