[seahorse/wip/userdocs: 298/420] Changes to pgp-retrieve-remote.page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit bfb26f1da8a6432cb621ec69fd9353828f6f7bc9
Author: Aruna Sankaranarayanan <arunasank src gnome org>
Date:   Tue Aug 20 16:56:28 2013 +0530

    Changes to pgp-retrieve-remote.page
    
    Reflow/rewording.

 help/C/pgp-retrieve-remote.page |   81 ++++++++++++++++++++-------------------
 1 files changed, 41 insertions(+), 40 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/pgp-retrieve-remote.page b/help/C/pgp-retrieve-remote.page
index 48a0e8c..f9e2053 100644
--- a/help/C/pgp-retrieve-remote.page
+++ b/help/C/pgp-retrieve-remote.page
@@ -1,6 +1,7 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
       xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
       type="topic" style="task"
+
       id="pgp-retrieve-remote">
 
   <info>
@@ -24,50 +25,50 @@
 
   <title>Retrieve remote keys</title>
 
-  <p>You may want to import the <em>Public keys</em> of people you frequently
+  <p>You may want to import the <em>public keys</em> of people you frequently
   communicate with to make it easier to encrypt messages to them.
-  <app>Passwords and Keys</app> helps you to import those keys about which you
-  have specific information, like the key ID or the owner's name or email
-  address.</p>
+  <app>Passwords and Keys</app> helps you to import a specific key when you
+  have certain details about it, like the key ID or the owner's name or email
+  address etc.</p>
 
   <steps>
     <title>To retrieve a remote key:</title>
-      <item>
-        <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Remote</gui>
-       <gui style="menuitem">Find Remote Keys…</gui></guiseq>.</p>
-      </item>
-      <item>
-       <p>In the new dialog that opens up, type in any information about the
-       key you wish to retrieve, in the text box next to the
-       <gui>Search for keys containing</gui> label. Details like key ID, or
-       the key owner's email address give more accurate results than the name
-       of the key owner.</p>
-      </item>
-      <item>
-       <p>You can additionally check which key servers must be searched in
-       order to find the key you are interested in by clicking the small
-       <gui>+</gui> next to <gui>Where to search</gui> and checking the key
-       servers you are interested in. All the key servers are checked, by
-       default.</p>
-      </item>
-      <item>
-       <p>When you have specified enough information, press the
-       <gui style="button">Search</gui> button.</p>
-      </item>
-      <item>
-       <p>You will be presented a list of keys that are relevant search
-       results. Select the key of your choice from the results and press the
-       <gui style="button">Import</gui> button present on the toolbar to
-       import the key into your keyring. You can press the
-       <gui style="button">Properties</gui> button to verify information about
-       the key, like the key ID, key fingerprint, level of trust, owner's
-       name, etc.</p>
-       <note style="tip">
-         <p>You can also right click on the key and select
-         <gui style="menuitem">Import</gui> or
-         <gui style="menuitem">Properties</gui>.</p>
-       </note>
-      </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Remote</gui>
+      <gui style="menuitem">Find Remote Keys…</gui></guiseq>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>In the new dialog that opens up, type in any information about the key
+      you wish to retrieve, in the text box next to the
+      <gui>Search for keys containing</gui> label. Details like key ID, or the
+      key owner's email address give more accurate results than the name of the
+      key owner.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>You can additionally check which key servers must be searched in order
+      to find the key you are interested in by clicking the small <gui>+</gui>
+      next to <gui>Where to search</gui> and checking the key servers you are
+      interested in. All the key servers are checked, by default.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>When you have specified enough information, press the
+      <gui style="button">Search</gui> button.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>You will see a list of keys that are relevant search results. To
+      verify a key from the list before importing it, select it and press the
+      <gui style="button">Properties</gui> button, found at the top.
+      Alternatively you can also right click on the key and select
+      <gui style="menuitem">Properties</gui>. This opens a dialog that shows
+      you all information about the key, like the key ID, key fingerprint,
+      level of trust, owner's name, etc.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Once you have verified a key, select it from the list and press the
+      <gui style="button">Import</gui> button present at the top to import the
+      key into <app>Passwords and keys</app>. Alternatively, you can also right
+      click on the key and select <gui style="menuitem">Import</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
   </steps>
 
 </page>