[seahorse/wip/userdocs: 40/416] help: Clean up key-photoid.page



commit 859a0d382a279f6533b28d8e04babf88cd0089dd
Author: Aruna Sankaranarayanan <arunasank src gnome org>
Date:   Fri Jun 28 01:14:11 2013 +0530

    help: Clean up key-photoid.page

 help/C/key-photoid.page |   22 +++++++++++-----------
 1 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/key-photoid.page b/help/C/key-photoid.page
index 72e911e..d4e21d2 100644
--- a/help/C/key-photoid.page
+++ b/help/C/key-photoid.page
@@ -17,25 +17,25 @@
 
   <title>Attach your photo to an existing key</title>
 
-  <p>You can attach a photo ID to your keys so that everyone can identify your
-  keys after looking at your photo. Though a key with an attached photo will
-  provide a slightly better level of security than a key with no photo,
-  checking the photo on a key is not as safe as checking the
+  <p>You can attach a photo ID to your keys so that everyone can verify the
+  ownership of your keys after looking at your photo. Though a key with an
+  attached photo will provide a slightly better level of security than a key
+  with no photo, checking the photo on a key is not as safe as checking the
   <link xref="key-fingerprint">fingerprint of the key</link> because anyone
   having your photos can create a key with your photo ID while the key
   fingerprint cannot be mimicked.</p>
 
   <note style="info">
-    <p>Unlike the restrictions in <app>gpg</app>, the photo you want to
+    <p>Unlike the restrictions in <app>GPG</app>, the photo you want to
     upload need not be in the <file>JPEG</file> format. <app>Passwords and
-    Keys</app> letss you upload your photo in <file>png</file>,
+    Keys</app> lets you upload your photo in <file>png</file>,
     <file>jpg</file> and several other common image formats.</p>
   </note>
 
   <steps>
     <title>To attach a photo ID:</title>
       <item>
-        <p>Select the key to which you want to add a photo ID.</p>
+        <p>Select the key to which you want to attach a photo ID.</p>
       </item>
       <item>
        <p>Right click on the chosen key and select
@@ -50,10 +50,10 @@
         <p>Select the photo of your choice from anywhere on your computer.</p>
         <note style="info">
           <p>The photos you select should be small in size, preferably about
-          120 by 150 pixels. Since a photo ID is always attached to its key a
-          large photos will increase the key size and thus slow down all
-          operations on the key. <app>Passwords and Keys</app> resizes large
-          photos to the optimal size after asking for your confirmation.</p>
+         120 by 150 pixels. Since a photo ID is always attached to its key a
+         large photo will increase the key size and slow down all operations
+         that use the key. <app>Passwords and Keys</app> resizes large photos
+         to the optimal size after asking for your confirmation.</p>
         </note>
       </item>
       <item>


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