[seahorse/wip/userdocs: 272/416] help: Mark key-photoid.page for review.



commit 7dc3f59bc68aeaf2bfba95873411c02a1c4fe505
Author: Aruna Sankaranarayanan <arunasank src gnome org>
Date:   Mon Jul 22 22:42:39 2013 -0400

    help: Mark key-photoid.page for review.

 help/C/key-photoid.page |    6 +++---
 1 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/key-photoid.page b/help/C/key-photoid.page
index 4f6d693..73349c6 100644
--- a/help/C/key-photoid.page
+++ b/help/C/key-photoid.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="index#pgp-keys"/>
 
     <revision version="0.1" date="2011-10-23" status="stub"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.9" version="0.1" date="2013-06-24" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.9" version="0.1" date="2013-06-24" status="review"/>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@
   fingerprint cannot be mimicked.</p>
 
   <note style="info">
-    <p>Unlike the restrictions in <app>GPG</app>, the photo you want to
+    <p>Unlike the restrictions in <app>GPG</app>, the photo ID you want to
     upload need not be in the <file>JPEG</file> format. <app>Passwords and
     Keys</app> lets you upload your photo in <file>png</file>,
     <file>jpg</file> and several other common image formats.</p>
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@
        <gui>Owner</gui></guiseq>.</p>
       </item>
       <item>
-       <p>Click on the button marked with a <gui style="button">+</gui> on
+       <p>Press the button marked with a <gui style="button">+</gui> on
        the left hand side to add a photo.</p>
       </item>
       <item>


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