[seahorse/wip/userdocs] help: Fix style, some minor updates.
- From: Aruna Sankaranarayanan <arunasank src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [seahorse/wip/userdocs] help: Fix style, some minor updates.
- Date: Mon, 17 Mar 2014 11:18:06 +0000 (UTC)
commit 273957743e724010bb7b850aca96bfe313e82bea
Author: Aruna Sankaranarayanan <arunasank src gnome org>
Date: Sun Mar 16 23:13:06 2014 +0530
help: Fix style, some minor updates.
help/C/passwords-view.page | 15 +++++-----
help/C/ssh-connect-remote.page | 33 ++++++++++++++++++++---
help/C/ssh-create.page | 56 ++++++++++++++++++++--------------------
3 files changed, 65 insertions(+), 39 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/passwords-view.page b/help/C/passwords-view.page
index 63b7e9a..52a1344 100644
--- a/help/C/passwords-view.page
+++ b/help/C/passwords-view.page
@@ -58,16 +58,17 @@
password.</p>
</item>
</steps>
+
<note style="important">
<p>Since the contents of any unlocked keyrings are available to programs
- you may be running, and Passwords and Keys does not seek to give a false
- sense of security, the contents of unlocked keyrings are able to be viewed
- without entering the password.</p>
- <p>This means that, if you are logged-in, the contents of the Login
- keyring will available without entering a password from Passwords and Keys.
- </p>
+ you may be running, and <app>Passwords and Keys</app> does not seek to give
+ a false sense of security, the contents of unlocked keyrings are able to be
+ viewed without entering the password.</p>
+ <p>This means that if you are logged-in, the contents of the
+ <gui>Login</gui> keyring will available without entering a password from
+ <app>Passwords and Keys</app>.</p>
<p>If you need to lend your computer to another person, it is recommended
- to create a user account for them, or allow them to use the Guest
+ that you create a user account for them, or allow them to use a guest
account.</p>
</note>
diff --git a/help/C/ssh-connect-remote.page b/help/C/ssh-connect-remote.page
index 40bca7a..e59398a 100644
--- a/help/C/ssh-connect-remote.page
+++ b/help/C/ssh-connect-remote.page
@@ -27,12 +27,37 @@
<title>Connect to other computers</title>
<p>You can use <app>Passwords and Keys</app> to install your SSH key onto a
-remote computer. If the other computer is configured p</p>
+ remote computer that can run an SSH server. You can also
+ <link xref="ssh-create#ssh-create-key-and-set-up">set up your SSH key for
+ remote login while creating the key</link>.</p>
<steps>
- <item><p>First step...</p></item>
- <item><p>Second step...</p></item>
- <item><p>Third step...</p></item>
+ <item>
+ <p>Right click on the <gui>SSH key</gui> and select <gui>Configure Key
+ for Secure Shell…</gui>.</p>
+ </item>
+ <item>
+ <p>In the dialog window that opens, enter the <gui>Server address</gui>
+ that you normally use to log in to the remote computer via SSH, and press
+ <gui>Set Up</gui>.</p>
+ </item>
+ <item>
+ <p>The program will now attempt to connect to the specified
+ <gui>Server address</gui> with the entered <gui>Login Name</gui>.If there
+ are any problems in accessing the remote computer, a pop-up window will
+ appear that explains the problem, and you can try again. Make sure that
+ you have a network connection and that the remote computer is on and
+ accessible.</p>
+ </item>
+ <item>
+ <p>If connection to the remote computer was successful, a dialog box will
+ appear which asks for the <gui>Password</gui> you use to log in to the
+ remote computer. Enter your password, then press
+ <gui style="button">OK</gui>.</p>
+ </item>
</steps>
+ <p>You should now be able to log in to the remote computer via SSH without a
+ password.</p>
+
</page>
diff --git a/help/C/ssh-create.page b/help/C/ssh-create.page
index 9299e0b..69b165e 100644
--- a/help/C/ssh-create.page
+++ b/help/C/ssh-create.page
@@ -36,18 +36,18 @@
<item><p>Select <gui>Secure Shell Key</gui> and then click
<gui>Continue</gui>.</p></item>
<item><p>Enter a description for the key. The key description will help
- you to identify the key later. For example, you could enter today's date,
- something about how the key will be used, or the server name on which you
- intend to install the key. The description field is optional, and how you
- describe the key is entirely up to you.</p></item>
+ you to identify the key later. For example, you could enter the date for
+ the day, something about how the key will be used, or the server name on
+ which you intend to install the key. The description field is optional,
+ and how you describe the key is entirely up to you.</p></item>
<item><p>You can change default settings for encryption type or key
- strength by expanding the Advanced key options panel.</p></item>
+ strength by expanding the <gui>Advanced key options</gui> panel.</p></item>
</steps>
<p>At this point, you can just create your key, or create your key
and install it on a remote computer to enable password-free login.</p>
- <section id="ssh-just-create-key" ui:expanded="true">
+ <section id="ssh-just-create-key" ui:expanded="false">
<title>Create your key and do not set up remote login</title>
<p>You can create the SSH key, and choose to set it up later.</p>
@@ -57,10 +57,7 @@
</item>
<item>
<p>Type a passphrase for your SSH key and press
- <gui style="button">OK</gui>. When you try to use this SSH key, your
- operating system will prompt you for this passphrase. This ensures
- that if someone gets access to your SSH key, they can't use it without
- the passphrase.</p>
+ <gui style="button">OK</gui>.</p>
</item>
<item>
<p>Retype the passphrase and press <gui style="button">OK</gui> to
@@ -71,23 +68,26 @@
<p>The SSH key will now be listed in the <gui>OpenSSH keys</gui>
keyring.</p>
+ <note style="tip">
+ <p> When you try to use your SSH key, your operating system will prompt
+ you for the passphrase used during creation. This ensures that if someone
+ gets access to your SSH key, they can't use it without the
+ passphrase.</p>
+ </note>
+
</section>
- <section id="ssh-create-key-and-set-up" ui:expanded="true">
+ <section id="ssh-create-key-and-set-up" ui:expanded="false">
<title>Create your key and install it on a remote computer</title>
<p>One of the most useful things about having an SSH key is that you can
install the public key on a remote computer. Doing this allows you to log
in to a remote computer with SSH without needing to enter your password
every time.</p>
+
<steps>
<item>
- <p>If you are in the process of creating a new SSH key:
- <p>Press the <gui style="button">Create and Set Up</gui> button,
- and follow the instructions on entering a passphrase, above.</p>
- </p>
- <p>If you have a preexisting key which you want to install on
- a remote computer: right click on the <gui>SSH key</gui> and select
- <gui>Configure Key for Secure Shell...</gui>.</p>
+ <p>Press the <gui style="button">Create and Set Up</gui> button, and
+ follow the instructions on entering a passphrase, above.</p>
</item>
<item>
<p>In the dialog window that opens, enter the <gui>Server address</gui>
@@ -95,13 +95,12 @@
</item>
<item>
<p>Ensure that the <gui>Login name</gui> you use on the remote
- computer is correct.</p>
+ computer is correct, and press <gui>Set Up</gui>.</p>
</item>
<item>
- <p>Press the <gui style="button">Set Up</gui> button to proceed.
- The program will now attempt to connect to the specified <gui>Server
- address</gui> with the entered <gui>Login name</gui>.</p>
- <p>If there are any problems in accessing the remote computer, a pop-up
+ <p>The program will now attempt to connect to the specified
+ <gui>Server address</gui> with the entered <gui>Login Name</gui>.If
+ there are any problems in accessing the remote computer, a pop-up
window will appear that explains the problem, and you can try again.
Make sure that you have a network connection and that the remote
computer is on and accessible.</p>
@@ -111,13 +110,14 @@
will appear which asks for the <gui>Password</gui> you use to log in to
the remote computer. Enter your password, then press
<gui style="button">OK</gui>.</p>
- <p>The public part of the selected SSH key will now be installed on the
- remote computer and configured to allow password-free SSH login.</p>
- <p>If the this step was successful, the dialog will close.</p>
</item>
</steps>
- <p>You should now be able to log in to the remote computer via SSH without
- a password.</p>
+
+ <p>The public part of the selected SSH key will now be installed on the
+ remote computer and configured to allow password-free SSH login. You should
+ now be able to log in to the remote computer via SSH without a
+ password.</p>
+
<note style="tip">
<p>Password-free login will currently only available when done from your
current local computer. When logging in, the SSH program will read the
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