[release-notes/gnome-3-12] minor fixes and restructuring

[Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>]

commit 12227536670bd13bf0fc18d0785f7aeabb6f86db
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Tue Mar 18 18:45:31 2014 +0000

    minor fixes and restructuring

 help/C/index.page        |   16 ++++++++--------
 help/C/more-core-ux.page |   23 +++++++++++------------
 2 files changed, 19 insertions(+), 20 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index a6aeb54..1134ed8 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -28,13 +28,6 @@
 
   <p>&gnomeversion; is the latest GNOME release, and the result of six months' work by the GNOME project. It 
includes new features and a large number of smaller improvements and enhancements. The release contains 
&gitcommits; changes by approximately &gitauthors; contributors. New features and improvements being 
introduced in GNOME &gnomeversion; include:</p>
 
-  <section id="videos">
-    <title>Videos </title>
-    <media type="image" src="figures/gnome-videos.png"/>
-    <p>GNOME 3.12 includes a reimagined <app>Videos</app> application. Modern in style, the new version 
allows you to browse videos that are on your computer, as well as online video channels. Channels in this 
release include <link href="http://www.rai.tv/";>Rai.tv</link>, <link 
href="http://www.theguardian.com/video";>The Guardian Videos</link> channel, <link 
href="http://blip.tv/";>Blip.tv</link> and <link href="http://trailers.apple.com/trailers/";>Apple Movie 
Trailers</link>. <link xref="developers#grilo-extensions">Developers can easily add their own video 
channels</link>, and we expect the list of channels to grow in the future. Additionally, integration with the 
popular <link href="https://getpocket.com/";>Pocket</link> service provides an easy way to watch videos that 
you have saved for later.</p>
-    <p><app>Videos</app> also includes a redesigned playback view. This provides a more streamlined 
experience than the previous version: floating playback controls hide when you don't need them, so that 
nothing gets in the way of your viewing, and the fullscreen playback view also has a new more refined 
look.</p>
-  </section>
-
   <section id="software">
     <title>Software Has Grown Up</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/gnome-software.png"/>
@@ -48,6 +41,13 @@
     <p>Checking for and installing software updates has also been improved for &gnomeversion;. It is now 
possible to choose to have your computer power off after updates have been installed, and you can also 
install updates from the system power off button. <app>Software</app> also indicates when the last update 
check was performed, and allows you to manually check for updates.</p>
   </section>
 
+  <section id="videos">
+    <title>All New Videos</title>
+    <media type="image" src="figures/gnome-videos.png"/>
+    <p>GNOME 3.12 includes a reimagined <app>Videos</app> application. Modern in style, the new version 
allows you to browse videos that are on your computer, as well as online video channels. Channels in this 
release include <link href="http://www.rai.tv/";>Rai.tv</link>, <link 
href="http://www.theguardian.com/video";>The Guardian Videos</link> channel, <link 
href="http://blip.tv/";>Blip.tv</link> and <link href="http://trailers.apple.com/trailers/";>Apple Movie 
Trailers</link>. <link xref="developers#grilo-extensions">Developers can easily add their own video 
channels</link>, and we expect the list of channels to grow in the future. Additionally, integration with the 
popular <link href="https://getpocket.com/";>Pocket</link> service provides an easy way to watch videos that 
you have saved for later.</p>
+    <p><app>Videos</app> also includes a redesigned playback view. This provides a more streamlined 
experience than the previous version: floating playback controls hide when you don't need them, so that 
nothing gets in the way of your viewing, and the fullscreen playback view also has a new more refined 
look.</p>
+  </section>
+
   <section id="rounding-out">
     <title>Rounding Things Out</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@
 
   <section id="getting-gnome">
     <title>Getting GNOME &gnomeversion;</title>
-    <p>GNOME's software is Free Software: all <link href="http://git.gnome.org/";>our code</link> is 
available for download and can be freely modified and redistributed. To install it, we recommend that you 
wait for the official packages provided by your vendor or distribution. Popular distributions will make GNOME 
&gnomeversion; available very soon, and some already have development versions that include the new GNOME 
release.</p>
+    <p>GNOME's software is <link href="https://gnu.org/philosophy/free-sw.html";>Free Software</link>: all 
<link href="http://git.gnome.org/";>our code</link> is available for download and can be freely modified and 
redistributed. To install it, we recommend that you wait for the official packages provided by your vendor or 
distribution. Popular distributions will make GNOME &gnomeversion; available very soon, and some already have 
development versions that include the new GNOME release.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="about">
diff --git a/help/C/more-core-ux.page b/help/C/more-core-ux.page
index 0f82ac3..2c70e61 100644
--- a/help/C/more-core-ux.page
+++ b/help/C/more-core-ux.page
@@ -20,13 +20,10 @@
 
   <p>The latest GNOME release includes other new features and improvements to the core GNOME 3 user 
experience.</p>
 
-  <section id="geolocation">
-    <title>Upgraded Geolocation</title>
+  <section id="popovers">
+    <title>Popovers</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>GNOME's new geolocation framework was first introduced in the previous release. Since then it has 
received a number of updates. Cell tower positioning, GPS and nearby Wi-Fi access points have been added as 
methods for determining location (GPS is only supported when built into a 3G modem), making positioning more 
accurate.</p>
-    <p>Geolocation feedback and controls have also been added for 3.12. An icon is now displayed in the top 
bar when an application is using location services, and geolocation controls have also been added to the 
system status menu. More detailed privacy controls are planned for the future.</p>
-    <p>Wi-Fi positioning utilizes the <link href="https://location.services.mozilla.com/";>Mozilla Location 
Service</link>, which means that you can help to improve accuracy with the MozStumbler Android app on your 
phone.</p>
-  
+    <p>GNOME 3.12 introduces a new interface element, called popovers. These overlaid bubbles are highly 
flexible and allow effective interface designs for many common tasks. They also lend themselves to 
imaginative and engaging design solutions. Popovers are used in a number of places in 3.12, and will become 
increasingly common in future versions.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="cloud-integration">
@@ -47,6 +44,14 @@
     <p>GNOME's initial setup assistant, which helps you get set up when you first run GNOME, has had a 
facelift for 3.12. Based on usability research funded by the <link href="https://01.org/";>Intel Open Source 
Technology Center</link>, every step of the initial setup process has been updated to make it easier and 
friendlier to use. Improvements include separate steps for selecting a language and region, a larger map for 
selecting a time zone, the ability to select an avatar for your user account, and improved graphics 
throughout.</p>
   </section>
 
+  <section id="geolocation">
+    <title>Upgraded Geolocation</title>
+    <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
+    <p>GNOME's new geolocation framework was first introduced in the previous release. Since then it has 
received a number of updates. Cell tower positioning, GPS and nearby Wi-Fi access points have been added as 
methods for determining location (GPS is only supported when built into a 3G modem), making positioning more 
accurate.</p>
+    <p>Geolocation feedback and controls have also been added for 3.12. An icon is now displayed in the top 
bar when an application is using location services, and geolocation controls have also been added to the 
system status menu. More detailed privacy controls are planned for the future.</p>
+    <p>Wi-Fi positioning utilizes the <link href="https://location.services.mozilla.com/";>Mozilla Location 
Service</link>, which means that you can help to improve accuracy with the MozStumbler Android app on your 
phone.</p>  
+  </section>
+
   <section id="wayland">
     <title>A Big Step Towards Wayland</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/wayland.png" style="floatright" />
@@ -55,12 +60,6 @@
     <p>If you are a developer or early adopter, you can test the latest <app>Wayland</app> work: see the 
<link type="topic" xref="developers#wayland">developer notes</link> for more details. Continued progress on 
the road to <app>Wayland</app> is planned for the next GNOME release.</p>
   </section>
 
-  <section id="popovers">
-    <title>Popovers</title>
-    <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>GNOME 3.12 introduces a new interface element, called popovers. These overlaid bubbles are highly 
flexible and allow effective interface designs for many common tasks. They also lend themselves to 
imaginative and engaging design solutions. Popovers are used in a number of places in 3.12, and will become 
increasingly common in future versions.</p>
-  </section>
-
   <section id="tabs">
     <title>Restyled Tabs</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>