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[gnome-user-docs] Review user-* pages for 3.14

commit 5c41d02e81ce0fbf45b5043de1e34c8a1e7159fd
Author: David King <amigadave amigadave com>
Date:   Mon Sep 22 15:41:18 2014 +0100

    Review user-* pages for 3.14

 gnome-help/C/user-add.page            |   38 +--------
 gnome-help/C/user-admin-change.page   |   14 +---
 gnome-help/C/user-admin-explain.page  |    8 +-
 gnome-help/C/user-admin-problems.page |    9 ++-
 gnome-help/C/user-autologin.page      |    6 +-
 gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page |    4 +-
 gnome-help/C/user-changepicture.page  |    9 +-
 gnome-help/C/user-delete.page         |    3 +-
 gnome-help/C/user-goodpassword.page   |  145 +++++++++++++++++----------------
 9 files changed, 105 insertions(+), 131 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-add.page b/gnome-help/C/user-add.page
index 9aecbf0..8090c53 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-add.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-add.page
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" version="0.3" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-01" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2013-11-01" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -34,41 +35,6 @@
 
   <title>Add a new user account</title>
 
-  <comment>
-    <cite date="2012-02-19">shaunm</cite>
-    <p>We need a note in here about password hints. Share content with
-    user-changepassword</p>
-  </comment>
-
-  <comment>
-    <cite date="2012-03-24">shaunm</cite>
-    <p>Let's add a "Disable account" page. Click the account, click the dots
-    next to "Password", select "Disable this account" from "Type".</p>
-  </comment>
-
-  <comment>
-    <cite date="2012-03-24">shaunm</cite>
-    <p>Much of the password dialog simply does not work:</p>
-    <list>
-      <item>
-        <p><gui>Choose a password at next login</gui> does nothing</p>
-      </item>
-      <item>
-        <p><gui>Log in without a password</gui> does nothing</p>
-      </item>
-      <item>
-        <p><gui>Enable this account</gui> does nothing (and it's not even
-        clear to me what it should do):
-        <link href="https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=655914";>665914</link></p>
-      </item>
-      <item>
-        <p><gui>Hint</gui> does nothing:
-        <link href="https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=647912";>647912</link>,
-        <link href="https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=643445";>643445</link></p>
-      </item>
-    </list>
-  </comment>
-
   <p>You can add multiple user accounts to your computer. Give one account to
   each person in your household or company. Every user has their own home
   folder, documents, and settings.</p>
@@ -105,7 +71,7 @@
       username, you can change it.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>You can chose to set a password for the new user, or let them set it
+      <p>You can choose to set a password for the new user, or let them set it
       themselves on their first login. You can press on the
       <gui style="button"><media its:translate="no" type="image" src="figures/system-run-symbolic.svg" 
width="16" height="16"><span its:translate="yes">generate
       password</span></media></gui> icon to automatically generate a random
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-change.page b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-change.page
index 29143ef..d9dc169 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-change.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-change.page
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-01" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -21,14 +22,15 @@
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
-    <desc>You can change which users are allowed to make changes to the system by giving them administrative 
privileges.</desc>
+    <desc>You can change which users are allowed to make changes to the system
+    by giving them administrative privileges.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Change who has administrative privileges</title>
 
   <p>Administrative privileges are a way of deciding who can make changes to
   important parts of the system. You can change which users have administrative
-  privileges and which ones don't. They are a good way of keeping your system
+  privileges and which ones do not. They are a good way of keeping your system
   secure and preventing potentially damaging unauthorized changes.</p>
 
   <p>You need <link xref="user-admin-explain">administrator privileges</link>
@@ -66,12 +68,4 @@
     privileges on one system.</p>
   </note>
 
-  <comment>
-    <cite date="2012-02-19" href="mailto:gnome-doc-list gnome org">GNOME
-    Documentation Project</cite>
-    <p>Explain how admin privileges can be given to other people, or removed.
-    Warn the reader about how it's unwise to have too many admins on a
-    system.</p>
-  </comment>
-       
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-explain.page b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-explain.page
index 825802e..f04ecf0 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-explain.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-explain.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-03" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -20,7 +21,8 @@
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
-    <desc>You need administrative privileges to change important parts of your system.</desc>
+    <desc>You need administrative privileges to change important parts of your
+    system.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>How do administrative privileges work?</title>
@@ -34,8 +36,8 @@
 
   <p>The way that they are protected is by only allowing users with
   <em>administrative privileges</em> to change the files or use the
-  applications. In day-to-day use, you won't need to change any system files or
-  use these applications, so by default you do not have administrative
+  applications. In day-to-day use, you will not need to change any system files
+  or use these applications, so by default you do not have administrative
   privileges.</p>
 
   <p>Sometimes you need to use these applications, so you may be able to
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-problems.page b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-problems.page
index e86606e..f8527e0 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-problems.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-problems.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-03" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -20,12 +21,13 @@
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
-    <desc>You can only do some things, like installing applications, if you have administrative 
privileges.</desc>
+    <desc>You can only do some things, like installing applications, if you
+    have administrative privileges.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Problems caused by administrative restrictions</title>
 
-  <p>You may experience a few problems if you don't have
+  <p>You may experience a few problems if you do not have
   <link xref="user-admin-explain">administrative privileges</link>. Some tasks
   require administrative privileges in order to work, such as:</p>
 
@@ -35,7 +37,8 @@
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Viewing the contents of a removable disk connected to the computer, or
-      the contents of a different disk partition (e.g. a Windows partition)</p>
+      the contents of a different disk partition (for example, a Windows
+      partition)</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Installing new applications</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-autologin.page b/gnome-help/C/user-autologin.page
index 610ebf1..1828770 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-autologin.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-autologin.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
     <link type="seealso" xref="shell-exit" />
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.1" date="2013-04-04" status="review" />
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="review" />
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
@@ -27,10 +28,11 @@
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Open <app>Settings</app> from the <gui>Activities</gui> overview.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Users</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Open the <gui>Users</gui> panel from <app>Settings</app>.</p>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Users</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Select the user account that you want to log in to automatically at
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page b/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page
index d7f3234..1a8b6d1 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-01" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -25,7 +26,8 @@
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
-    <desc>Keep your account secure by changing your password often in your account settings.</desc>
+    <desc>Keep your account secure by changing your password often in your
+    account settings.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Change your password</title>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-changepicture.page b/gnome-help/C/user-changepicture.page
index cf93e9f..5f37a8a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-changepicture.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-changepicture.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-01" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -56,14 +57,14 @@
       for yourself.</p>
       <list>
         <item>
-          <p>If you'd rather use a picture you already have on your computer,
-          click <gui>Browse for more pictures…</gui>.</p>
+          <p>If you would rather use a picture you already have on your
+          computer, click <gui>Browse for more pictures…</gui>.</p>
         </item>
         <item>
           <p>If you have a webcam, you can take a new login photo right now by
           clicking <gui>Take a photo…</gui>. Take your picture, then move and
-          resize the square outline to crop out the parts you don't want. If
-          you don't like the picture you took, click <gui>Discard photo</gui>
+          resize the square outline to crop out the parts you do not want. If
+          you do not like the picture you took, click <gui>Discard photo</gui>
           to try again, or <gui>Cancel</gui> to give up.</p>
         </item>
       </list>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-delete.page b/gnome-help/C/user-delete.page
index b5efdcf..f62669a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-delete.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-delete.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-01" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
@@ -64,7 +65,7 @@
     <item>
       <p>Each user has their own home folder for their files and settings. You
       can choose to keep or delete the user's home folder. Click <gui>Delete
-      Files</gui> if you're sure they won't be used anymore and you need to
+      Files</gui> if you are sure they will not be used anymore and you need to
       free up disk space. These files are permanently deleted. They cannot be
       recovered. You may want to back up the files to an external drive or CD
       before deleting them.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-goodpassword.page b/gnome-help/C/user-goodpassword.page
index a6a65b2..385cba0 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-goodpassword.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-goodpassword.page
@@ -5,8 +5,8 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="user-accounts#passwords"/>
 
-    <desc>Use longer, more complicated passwords.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -26,80 +26,83 @@
     </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
-  </info>
 
-<title>Choose a secure password</title>
+    <desc>Use longer, more complicated passwords.</desc>
+  </info>
 
-<note style="important">
- <p>
- Make your passwords easy enough for you to remember, but very difficult for
- others (including computer programs) to guess.
- </p>
-</note>
-  <p>Choosing a good password will help to keep your computer safe. If your
- password is easy to guess, someone may figure it out and gain access to your
- personal information.</p>
-  <p>People could even use computers to systematically try to guess your
- password, so even one that would be difficult for a human to guess might be
- extremely easy for a computer program to crack. Here are some tips for choosing
- a good password:</p>
+  <title>Choose a secure password</title>
 
-<list>
- <item>
-  <p>Use a mixture of upper-case and lower-case letters, numbers, symbols and
- spaces in the password.  This makes it more difficult to guess; there are more
- symbols from which to choose, meaning more possible passwords that someone
- would have to check when trying to guess yours.</p>
-  <note>
-  <p>A good method for choosing a password is to take the first letter of each
- word in a phrase that you can remember.  The phrase could be the name of a
- movie, a book, a song or an album. For example, "Flatland: A Romance of Many
- Dimensions" would become F:ARoMD or faromd or f: aromd.</p>
-</note>
- </item>
- <item>
-  <p>Make your password as long as possible. The more characters it contains,
- the longer it should take for a person or computer to guess it.</p>
- </item>
- <item>
-  <p>Do not use any words that appear in a standard dictionary in any language.
-  Password crackers will try these first.   The most common password is
- "password" -- people can guess passwords like this very quickly!</p>
-  </item>
-  <item>
-  <p>Do not use any personal information such as a date, license plate number,
- or any family member's name.</p>
-  </item>
-  <item>
-  <p>Do not use any nouns. </p>
- </item>
- <item>
-  <p>Choose a password that can be typed quickly, to decrease the chances of
- someone being able to make out what you have typed if they happen to be
- watching you.</p>
- <note style="tip">
-  <p>Never write your passwords down anywhere.  They can be easily found!</p>
- </note>
- </item>
- <item>
-  <p>Use different passwords for different things.</p>
- </item>
+  <note style="important">
+    <p>Make your passwords easy enough for you to remember, but very difficult
+    for others (including computer programs) to guess.</p>
+  </note>
 
- <item>
-  <p>Use different passwords for different accounts.</p>
-  <p>If you use the same password for all of your accounts, anyone who guesses
- it will be able to access all of your accounts immediately.</p>
-  <p>It can be difficult to remember lots of passwords, however. Though not as
- secure as using a different passwords for everything, it may be easier to use
- the same one for things that don't matter (like websites), and different ones
- for important things (like your online banking account and your email).</p>
- </item>
+  <p>Choosing a good password will help to keep your computer safe. If your
+  password is easy to guess, someone may figure it out and gain access to your
+  personal information.</p>
 
- <item>
-  <p>
-   Change your passwords regularly.
-  </p>
- </item>
-</list>
+  <p>People could even use computers to systematically try to guess your
+  password, so even one that would be difficult for a human to guess might be
+  extremely easy for a computer program to crack. Here are some tips for
+  choosing a good password:</p>
+  
+  <list>
+    <item>
+      <p>Use a mixture of upper-case and lower-case letters, numbers, symbols
+      and spaces in the password. This makes it more difficult to guess; there
+      are more symbols from which to choose, meaning more possible passwords
+      that someone would have to check when trying to guess yours.</p>
+      <note>
+        <p>A good method for choosing a password is to take the first letter of
+        each word in a phrase that you can remember. The phrase could be the
+        name of a movie, a book, a song or an album. For example, "Flatland: A
+        Romance of Many Dimensions" would become F:ARoMD or faromd or f:
+        aromd.</p>
+      </note>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Make your password as long as possible. The more characters it
+      contains, the longer it should take for a person or computer to guess
+      it.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Do not use any words that appear in a standard dictionary in any
+      language. Password crackers will try these first. The most common
+      password is "password" -- people can guess passwords like this very
+      quickly!</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Do not use any personal information such as a date, license plate
+      number, or any family member's name.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Do not use any nouns.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Choose a password that can be typed quickly, to decrease the chances
+      of someone being able to make out what you have typed if they happen to
+      be watching you.</p>
+      <note style="tip">
+        <p>Never write your passwords down anywhere. They can be easily
+        found!</p>
+      </note>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Use different passwords for different things.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Use different passwords for different accounts.</p>
+      <p>If you use the same password for all of your accounts, anyone who
+      guesses it will be able to access all of your accounts immediately.</p>
+      <p>It can be difficult to remember lots of passwords, however. Though not
+      as secure as using a different passwords for everything, it may be easier
+      to use the same one for things that do not matter (like websites), and
+      different ones for important things (like your online banking account and
+      your email).</p>
+   </item>
+   <item>
+     <p>Change your passwords regularly.</p>
+   </item>
+  </list>
 
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