[gnome-user-docs] Further improvements to the dconf lockdown page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit e2dec81f6995e82b940ffab303251942a686bf58
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Fri Feb 13 22:04:40 2015 +0000

    Further improvements to the dconf lockdown page

 system-admin-guide/C/dconf-lockdown.page |   13 +++++++------
 1 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/system-admin-guide/C/dconf-lockdown.page b/system-admin-guide/C/dconf-lockdown.page
index e8b4f89..896635a 100644
--- a/system-admin-guide/C/dconf-lockdown.page
+++ b/system-admin-guide/C/dconf-lockdown.page
@@ -40,9 +40,9 @@
   <steps>
     <title>Lock a setting</title>
     <item>
-      <p>Before you can lock down a key, you need to set it. In this example
-      you will learn how to lock <link xref="desktop-background">a background
-      setting</link> once it has been set. At this point, you should have
+      <p>Before you can lock down a key, you need to set it. This example shows
+      how to lock <link xref="desktop-background">a background setting</link>
+      once it has been set. At this point, you should have
       <link xref="dconf-profiles">a <sys>user</sys> profile</link> and
       <link xref="dconf-keyfiles">a keyfile</link> with the settings that you
       want to lock down.</p>
@@ -52,9 +52,10 @@
       <file its:translate="no">/etc/dconf/db/local.d/locks</file>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Edit
-      <file its:translate="no">/etc/dconf/db/local.d/locks/00_default-wallpaper</file>,
-      listing one key per line:</p>
+      <p>Create a file in the
+      <file its:translate="no">/etc/dconf/db/local.d/locks/</file> directory
+      and list one key per line. For exmaple, create
+      <file its:translate="no">/etc/dconf/db/local.d/locks/00_default-wallpaper</file>:</p>
 <code its:translate="no">
 # <span its:translate="yes">prevent changes to the background</span>
 /org/gnome/desktop/background/picture-uri