[gnome-klotski/wip/mallard-help-merge: 18/92] help: rephrased the description, fixed the introduction link in index.page
- From: Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [gnome-klotski/wip/mallard-help-merge: 18/92] help: rephrased the description, fixed the introduction link in index.page
- Date: Sun, 25 Jan 2015 22:19:15 +0000 (UTC)
commit f8d87310d1588c0b9ac269cacba482039af09844
Author: Rashi Aswani <aswanirashi19 gmail com>
Date: Thu Jul 3 02:56:45 2014 +0530
help: rephrased the description, fixed the introduction link in index.page
help/C/index.page | 14 +++++---------
1 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index 48add65..15626df 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -17,15 +17,15 @@
<license>
<p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
</license>
+
+ <desc>GNOME Klotski help</desc>
</info>
<title><media type="image" its:translate="no" src="figures/logo32.png">
Klotski logo</media> Klotski</title>
- <p>Slide blocks to solve the puzzle. You can visit
- <link xref="game-introduction">Game introduction</link> to know more about
- the game. Other help topics are grouped together into sections below.</p>
- <!--"You can visit" doesn't sound right. Rephrase this sentence to say "To know more about the game, visit
<link>..." -->
- <!--Why does the introduction link appear again on the index? Fix it. -->
+ <p>Slide blocks to solve the puzzle. To know more about the game, visit
+ <link xref="introduction">Game introduction</link>. Other help topics
+ are grouped together into sections below.</p>
<section id="play" style="2column">
<title>Playing Klotski</title>
@@ -33,10 +33,6 @@
<section id="tips" style="2column">
<title>Useful tips</title>
- </section>
-
- <section id="advanced" style="2column">
- <title>Advanced</title>
</section>
</page>
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