[tali/wip/mallard-help-merge: 46/60] help: rephrased steps in game-settings.page, correct link to start a new game
- From: Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [tali/wip/mallard-help-merge: 46/60] help: rephrased steps in game-settings.page, correct link to start a new game
- Date: Mon, 26 Jan 2015 18:53:00 +0000 (UTC)
commit 64ce992b347305dc2a94389d4ea00620b5ae8697
Author: Rashi Aswani <aswanirashi19 gmail com>
Date: Wed Jul 16 17:27:41 2014 +0530
help: rephrased steps in game-settings.page, correct link to start a new game
help/C/game-settings.page | 10 ++++------
1 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/game-settings.page b/help/C/game-settings.page
index c901b4a..8a35b66 100644
--- a/help/C/game-settings.page
+++ b/help/C/game-settings.page
@@ -26,12 +26,10 @@
<steps>
<item><p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Tali</gui>
<gui style="menuitem">Preferences</gui></guiseq>.</p></item>
- <item><p>You can select the game version you want to play from the drop
- down menu next to <gui>Game Type</gui>.</p></item>
- <!-- Not digging the language, avoid "You can blah blah", just start with "Select the desired version
of the game from <gui>..." -->
- <item><p>To start playing the newly selected version of the game, you
- need to <link xref="play-game">Start a new game</link>.</p></item>
- <!-- language, language! Just say "Now, you may <link> Start a new.. " -->
+ <item><p>Select the desired version of the game from
+ <gui>Game Type</gui>.</p></item>
+ <item><p>Now, you may <link xref="start-game">Start a new game</link>.
+ </p></item>
</steps>
</page>
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