[tali/wip/mallard-help-merge: 36/49] help: rename play-game.page to start-game.page, merged the two notes



commit 28b90dfe19313cb251d32962dc202abfba6b1872
Author: Rashi Aswani <aswanirashi19 gmail com>
Date:   Wed Jul 16 16:15:56 2014 +0530

    help: rename play-game.page to start-game.page, merged the two notes

 help/C/{play-game.page => start-game.page} |   28 ++++++++++------------------
 1 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/play-game.page b/help/C/start-game.page
similarity index 67%
rename from help/C/play-game.page
rename to help/C/start-game.page
index 9a80da0..d69f9fb 100644
--- a/help/C/play-game.page
+++ b/help/C/start-game.page
@@ -1,7 +1,6 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
       type="topic"
-      id="play-game">
-<!--The page says start a new game, your id is play-game, can we have a little consistency here please? 
change page id to start-game or something -->
+      id="start-game">
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#play"/>
@@ -40,9 +39,8 @@
 
   <steps>
     <item><p>Click on the dice you wish to roll. You can select all the dice to
-    roll in the second or third roll by clicking <gui>Roll all!</gui> on the
-    bottom left.</p></item>
-    <!-- you dont have to indicate the areas in the screen!! remove "on the bottom left" -->
+    roll in the second or third roll by clicking <gui>Roll all!</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
     <item><p>Click on <gui>Roll!</gui> to roll the selected dice.</p></item>
     <item><p>When you have a hand you like or have run out of chances to throw
     the dice, click on a row corresponding to what you think is your best
@@ -50,23 +48,17 @@
     click on the wrong row, you will be scored accordingly.</p></item>
   </steps>
 
-  <note>
-    <p>You can only use each combination once, if you have chosen a scoring
-    combination once, you can not choose the same again.</p>
-  </note>
-
   <note style="important">
-    <p>There is one exception to this rule, if you roll a <gui>5 of a
-    Kind</gui> a second time, you can place it in the <gui>5 of a Kind</gui>
-    row again for fifty points.You can keep doing this each time you get
-    another <gui>5 of a  Kind</gui>.</p>
-    <!--to which rule is the exception?? dont split notes! -->
+    <p>You can only use each combination once, if you have chosen a scoring
+    combination once, you can not choose the same again. There is one exception
+    to this rule, if you roll a <gui>5 of a Kind</gui> a second time, you can
+    place it in the <gui>5 of a Kind</gui> row again for fifty points.You can
+    keep doing this each time you get another <gui>5 of a  Kind</gui>.</p>
   </note>
 
   <note style="tip">
-    <p>There is also a bonus of 35 points if you score a total of
-    63 points or more in the top six rows.</p>
-    <!-- Avoid the word "also", rewrite this sentence -->
+    <p>There is a bonus of 35 points if you score a total of 63 points or more
+    in the top six rows.</p>
   </note>
   </section>
 </page>


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