[tali/wip/mallard-help-merge: 2/25] Review commit: fix as asked in comments
- From: Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [tali/wip/mallard-help-merge: 2/25] Review commit: fix as asked in comments
- Date: Tue, 27 Jan 2015 10:34:18 +0000 (UTC)
commit 60ede7e020e713bb9fbd690d3cd7b411ef127d93
Author: Sindhu S <sindhus live in>
Date: Wed Jul 9 00:27:34 2014 +0530
Review commit: fix as asked in comments
help/C/game-settings.page | 3 +++
help/C/play-game.page | 2 +-
help/C/players-setting.page | 3 ++-
help/C/score-slot.page | 1 +
help/C/start-game.page | 2 +-
5 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/game-settings.page b/help/C/game-settings.page
index 6809baa..9092b41 100644
--- a/help/C/game-settings.page
+++ b/help/C/game-settings.page
@@ -21,6 +21,9 @@
<p>You can play the regular version of the game which is similar to Yahtzee
or the game with colors, similar to Kismet. To switch over to another version
of the game:</p>
+ <!-- check for trailing spaces -->
+ <!--The first sentence must be reworded to say "blah blah is the default game, to switch over to another
gamae:" -->
+ <!-- Why is this in list!!! argh...rewrite using steps! -->
<list>
<item><p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Tali</gui>
<gui style="menuitem">Preferences</gui></guiseq> from the application
diff --git a/help/C/play-game.page b/help/C/play-game.page
index 6044d85..ec7aca6 100644
--- a/help/C/play-game.page
+++ b/help/C/play-game.page
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
type="topic"
id="play-game">
-
+<!-- be consistent!! in klotski you have different arrangement of pages...like you say in klotski "start a
new game" and here you say "play" -->
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="index#play"/>
<revision version="3.12" date="2014-06-13" status="review"/>
diff --git a/help/C/players-setting.page b/help/C/players-setting.page
index 23473f1..1f49b23 100644
--- a/help/C/players-setting.page
+++ b/help/C/players-setting.page
@@ -1,6 +1,7 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
type="topic"
id="players-setting">
+ <!-- just settings is fine, this page must go in advanced section on index -->
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="index#play"/>
@@ -20,7 +21,7 @@
<p>You can change the number of <gui>Human Players</gui> and <gui>Computer
Opponents</gui>.</p>
-
+<!-- use steps!! -->
<list>
<item><p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Tali</gui>
<gui style="menuitem">Preferences</gui></guiseq> from the application menu.
diff --git a/help/C/score-slot.page b/help/C/score-slot.page
index e777e96..6c2ae26 100644
--- a/help/C/score-slot.page
+++ b/help/C/score-slot.page
@@ -1,6 +1,7 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
type="topic"
id="score-slot">
+ <!--merge this page with scores please! -->
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="index#play"/>
diff --git a/help/C/start-game.page b/help/C/start-game.page
index f21b020..1c3f7ca 100644
--- a/help/C/start-game.page
+++ b/help/C/start-game.page
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
type="topic"
id="start-game">
-
+<!-- merge this with play page -->
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="index#play"/>
<revision version="3.12" date="2014-06-11" status="review"/>
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