[gnome-user-docs] Review bluetooth-* for 3.18

[David King <davidk src gnome org>]

commit 129f0aa658d2ec67b285305e1c01bf26f60ec938
Author: David King <amigadave amigadave com>
Date:   Mon Sep 28 18:43:52 2015 +0100

    Review bluetooth-* for 3.18

 gnome-help/C/bluetooth-connect-device.page     |    9 +++++++--
 gnome-help/C/bluetooth-problem-connecting.page |    5 +++++
 gnome-help/C/bluetooth-remove-connection.page  |    6 ++++++
 gnome-help/C/bluetooth-send-file.page          |    6 ++++++
 gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page        |   11 +++++++++--
 gnome-help/C/bluetooth-visibility.page         |    8 +++++++-
 6 files changed, 40 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-connect-device.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-connect-device.page
index 0c3081c..ea67d20 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-connect-device.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-connect-device.page
@@ -13,6 +13,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-09" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Jim Campbell</name>
@@ -34,6 +35,10 @@
       <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
       <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>David King</name>
+      <email>amigadave amigadave com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -43,8 +48,8 @@
   <title>Connect your computer to a Bluetooth device</title>
 
   <p>Before you can use a Bluetooth device like a mouse or a headset, you first
-  need to connect your computer to the device. This is also called pairing the
-  Bluetooth devices.</p>
+  need to connect your computer to the device. This is also called
+  <em>pairing</em> the Bluetooth devices.</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-problem-connecting.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-problem-connecting.page
index 21f5c56..872cf00 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-problem-connecting.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-problem-connecting.page
@@ -12,6 +12,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-09" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-10-12" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
@@ -21,6 +22,10 @@
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
       <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>David King</name>
+      <email>amigadave amigadave com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-remove-connection.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-remove-connection.page
index 7b871f9..d001751 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-remove-connection.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-remove-connection.page
@@ -11,6 +11,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-07" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-04" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Jim Campbell</name>
@@ -30,6 +31,11 @@
       <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
       <years>2014</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>David King</name>
+      <email>amigadave amigadave com</email>
+      <years>2015</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-send-file.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-send-file.page
index 64b565b..4e6c2f7 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-send-file.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-send-file.page
@@ -13,6 +13,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-09" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Jim Campbell</name>
@@ -31,6 +32,11 @@
       <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
       <years>2014</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>David King</name>
+      <email>amigadave amigadave com</email>
+      <years>2015</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page
index ac198d6..90c5b52 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page
@@ -11,6 +11,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-09" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-04" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-21" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Jim Campbell</name>
@@ -30,6 +31,11 @@
       <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
       <years>2014</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>David King</name>
+      <email>amigadave amigadave com</email>
+      <years>2015</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -96,8 +102,9 @@
       right side of the top bar.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select <gui>Bluetooth</gui>. The Bluetooth section of the menu will
-      expand.</p>
+      <p>Select
+      <media its:translate="no" type="image" mime="image/svg" 
src="figures/bluetooth-active-symbolic.svg"><gui its:translate="yes">Not In Use</gui></media>).
+      The Bluetooth section of the menu will expand.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Select <gui>Turn Off</gui>.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-visibility.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-visibility.page
index 7ce7e5b..9538e60 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-visibility.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-visibility.page
@@ -10,6 +10,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-09" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-04" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-10-12" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -25,6 +26,11 @@
       <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
       <years>2014</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>David King</name>
+      <email>amigadave amigadave com</email>
+      <years>2015</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -35,7 +41,7 @@
 
   <p>Bluetooth visibility refers to whether other devices can discover
   your computer when searching for Bluetooth devices. When Bluetooth is turned
-  on and the <gui>Bluetooth</gui> panel is open, your computer will advertise
+  on and the <gui>Bluetooth</gui> panel is open, your computer will advertize
   itself to all other devices within range, allowing them to attempt to connect
   to your computer.</p>