[gnome-getting-started-docs] Minor terminology updates
- From: Petr Kovář <pmkovar src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [gnome-getting-started-docs] Minor terminology updates
- Date: Tue, 29 Sep 2015 01:22:37 +0000 (UTC)
commit b727f3acbd01df68f2cf67f62cddfc270a682ac1
Author: Petr Kovar <pkovar redhat com>
Date: Mon Sep 28 21:22:02 2015 -0400
Minor terminology updates
gnome-help/C/gs-change-date-time-timezone.page | 11 ++++-------
gnome-help/C/gs-change-wallpaper.page | 7 ++++---
gnome-help/C/gs-connect-online-accounts.page | 9 +++++----
gnome-help/C/gs-get-online.page | 21 ++++++++++++++-------
gnome-help/C/gs-use-system-search.page | 9 +++++----
5 files changed, 32 insertions(+), 25 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/gs-change-date-time-timezone.page b/gnome-help/C/gs-change-date-time-timezone.page
index b132850..f74d94d 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/gs-change-date-time-timezone.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/gs-change-date-time-timezone.page
@@ -25,9 +25,10 @@
src="gs-goa1.svg" width="100%" />
<steps>
- <item><p>Click the system menu on the right side of the top bar.</p></item>
- <item><p>Press the settings button at the bottom of the menu.</p></item>
- <item><p>From the list of panels, select <gui>Date & Time</gui>.</p></item>
+ <item><p>Click the <gui xref="shell-terminology">system menu</gui> on the
+ right side of the top bar.</p></item>
+ <item><p>Click the settings button at the bottom left of the menu.</p></item>
+ <item><p>Select the <gui>Date & Time</gui> panel.</p></item>
</steps>
<media its:translate="yes" type="image" mime="image/svg"
@@ -49,8 +50,4 @@
Time Settings</gui>, and then close the panel.</p></item>
</steps>
- <!-- FIXME:
- - explain what time/date does - a reference in further reading?
- -->
-
</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/gs-change-wallpaper.page b/gnome-help/C/gs-change-wallpaper.page
index c1b34c4..b2953ad 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/gs-change-wallpaper.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/gs-change-wallpaper.page
@@ -55,9 +55,10 @@
<title>Change the wallpaper</title>
<steps>
- <item><p>Click the system menu on the right side of the top bar and press
- the settings button at the bottom of the menu.</p></item>
- <item><p>From the list of panels, select <gui>Background</gui>.</p></item>
+ <item><p>Click the <gui xref="shell-terminology">system menu</gui> on the
+ right side of the top bar.</p></item>
+ <item><p>Click the settings button at the bottom left of the menu.</p></item>
+ <item><p>Click the <gui>Background</gui> panel.</p></item>
<item><p>Click the current background image on the left side of the
<gui>Background</gui> window.</p></item>
<item><p>Click the background image you want to use.</p></item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/gs-connect-online-accounts.page b/gnome-help/C/gs-connect-online-accounts.page
index ceec75f..a010b1a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/gs-connect-online-accounts.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/gs-connect-online-accounts.page
@@ -25,16 +25,17 @@
src="gs-goa1.svg" width="100%" />
<steps>
- <item><p>Click the system menu on the right side of the top bar.</p></item>
- <item><p>Press the settings button at the bottom of the menu.</p></item>
+ <item><p>Click the <gui xref="shell-terminology">system menu</gui> on the
+ right side of the top bar.</p></item>
+ <item><p>Click the settings button at the bottom left of the menu.</p></item>
</steps>
<media its:translate="no" type="image" mime="image/svg"
src="gs-goa2.svg" width="100%" />
<steps style="continues">
- <item><p>From the list of panels, select <gui>Online Accounts</gui>, then
- click on the <gui>Add an online account</gui> button.</p></item>
+ <item><p>Click the <gui>Online Accounts</gui> panel, then
+ click the <gui>Add an online account</gui> button.</p></item>
</steps>
<note><p>If you have set up an online account before, you can add another
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/gs-get-online.page b/gnome-help/C/gs-get-online.page
index e47a1f0..8d0f2dc 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/gs-get-online.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/gs-get-online.page
@@ -34,8 +34,8 @@
<steps>
<item><p>The network connection icon on the right-hand side of the top
- bar shows that you are off-line.</p>
- <p>The off-line status can be caused by a number of reasons: for
+ bar shows that you are offline.</p>
+ <p>The offline status can be caused by a number of reasons: for
example, a network cable has been unplugged, the computer has been set
to run in <em>airplane mode</em>, or there are no available Wi-Fi
networks in your area.</p>
@@ -58,9 +58,18 @@
src="gs-go-online2.svg" width="100%" />
<steps>
- <item><p>To connect to a Wi-Fi (wireless) network, click the status menu at
- the top right of the screen, and then click <gui>Select Network</gui>.</p>
- </item>
+ <title>To connect to a Wi-Fi (wireless) network:</title>
+ <item>
+ <p>Click the <gui xref="shell-terminology">system menu</gui> on the right
+ side of the top bar.</p>
+ </item>
+ <item>
+ <p>Select <gui>Wi-Fi Not Connected</gui>. The Wi-Fi section of the menu
+ will expand.</p>
+ </item>
+ <item>
+ <p>Click <gui>Select Network</gui>.</p>
+ </item>
</steps>
<note style="important">
@@ -78,8 +87,6 @@
credentials.</p></item>
</steps>
- <!-- FIXME: links to existing wireless/broadband connection documents. -->
-
</section>
</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/gs-use-system-search.page b/gnome-help/C/gs-use-system-search.page
index 3bdd151..d1cb5e7 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/gs-use-system-search.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/gs-use-system-search.page
@@ -77,12 +77,13 @@
</p>
</note>
- <p>To customize what is displayed in the search results:</p>
<steps>
- <item><p>Click the system menu on the right side of the top bar and press
- the settings button at the bottom of the menu.</p></item>
- <item><p>From the list of panels, select <gui>Search</gui>.</p></item>
+ <title>To customize what is displayed in the search results:</title>
+ <item><p>Click the <gui xref="shell-terminology">system menu</gui> on the
+ right side of the top bar.</p></item>
+ <item><p>Click the settings button at the bottom left of the menu.</p></item>
+ <item><p>Click the <gui>Search</gui> panel.</p></item>
<item><p>In the list of search locations, click the <gui>ON/OFF</gui>
switch next to the search location you want to enable or disable.</p>
</item>
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