[gnome-user-docs] Incremental fixes to clock-* pages
- From: Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [gnome-user-docs] Incremental fixes to clock-* pages
- Date: Wed, 30 Sep 2015 20:20:19 +0000 (UTC)
commit 59c6966962dd99f55f9b04bceec1d37df7208064
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill gnome org>
Date: Wed Sep 30 16:19:41 2015 -0400
Incremental fixes to clock-* pages
gnome-help/C/clock-calendar.page | 13 ++++++++-----
gnome-help/C/clock-set.page | 7 ++++---
gnome-help/C/clock-world.page | 25 ++++++++++++++++++++-----
gnome-help/C/clock.page | 2 +-
4 files changed, 33 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/clock-calendar.page b/gnome-help/C/clock-calendar.page
index 02b2ce1..3b5bb55 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/clock-calendar.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/clock-calendar.page
@@ -50,11 +50,14 @@
<item>
<p>Click the date for which you want to see your appointments from the
calendar.</p>
- </item>
- <item>
- <p>Existing appointments will be displayed on the right. As appointments
- are added to the calendar, they will appear in the clock's appointment
- list.</p>
+
+ <note>
+ <p>A small dot is shown under each date that has an appointment.</p>
+ </note>
+
+ <p>Existing appointments will be displayed to the left of the calendar.
+ As appointments are added to the calendar, they will appear in the
+ clock's appointment list.</p>
</item>
</steps>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page b/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
index eaa8f40..e6a4102 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
@@ -21,7 +21,8 @@
<include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
- <desc>Click the clock on the top bar and go into the <gui>Date & Time Settings</gui> to alter the
date/time.</desc>
+ <desc>Use the <gui>Date & Time Settings</gui> to alter the date or
+ time.</desc>
</info>
<title>Change the date and time</title>
@@ -31,8 +32,8 @@
<steps>
<item>
- <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui> overview and
- start typing <gui>Date & Time</gui>.</p>
+ <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui>
+ overview and start typing <gui>Date & Time</gui>.</p>
</item>
<item>
<p>Click on <gui>Date & Time</gui> to open the control center.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/clock-world.page b/gnome-help/C/clock-world.page
index 48d92af..2b256ac 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/clock-world.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/clock-world.page
@@ -20,6 +20,8 @@
<title>Add a world clock</title>
+ <p>Use <app>Clocks</app> to add times in other cities.</p>
+
<note>
<p>This requires the <app>Clocks</app> application to be installed.</p>
<p>Most distributions come with <app>Clocks</app> installed by default.
@@ -27,14 +29,27 @@
package manager.</p>
</note>
- <p>Use <app>Clocks</app> to add times in other cities.</p>
-
<p>To add a world clock:</p>
<steps>
- <item><p>First step...</p></item>
- <item><p>Second step...</p></item>
- <item><p>Third step...</p></item>
+ <item>
+ <p>Click on the clock on the top bar.</p>
+ </item>
+ <item>
+ <p>Click the <gui>Add world clocks...</gui> link under the calendar to
+ launch <app>Clocks</app>.</p>
+
+ <note>
+ <p>If you already have one or more world clocks, click on one and
+ <app>Clocks</app> will launch.</p>
+ </note>
+
+ </item>
+ <item>
+ <p>Existing appointments will be displayed on the right. As appointments
+ are added to the calendar, they will appear in the clock's appointment
+ list.</p>
+ </item>
</steps>
</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/clock.page b/gnome-help/C/clock.page
index efe329a..fd17af5 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/clock.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/clock.page
@@ -18,8 +18,8 @@
<desc>
<link xref="clock-set">Set date and time</link>,
- <link xref="clock-timezone">timezone</link>,
<link xref="clock-world">world clocks</link>,
+ <link xref="clock-timezone">timezone</link>,
<link xref="clock-calendar">calendar and appointments</link>…
</desc>
</info>
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