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[gnome-user-docs] Updates to privacy pages

commit 5b8c43eea921725c600e7920ef73df2a43f5db99
Author: Shaun McCance <shaunm redhat com>
Date:   Wed Sep 30 18:00:42 2015 -0400

    Updates to privacy pages

 gnome-help/C/privacy-history-recent-off.page   |   19 ++++++-----
 gnome-help/C/privacy-location.page             |    6 ++--
 gnome-help/C/privacy-name-visibility.page.stub |   38 ------------------------
 gnome-help/C/privacy-purge.page                |   34 ++++++++++----------
 gnome-help/C/privacy-screen-lock.page          |   36 +++++++++++++---------
 gnome-help/C/privacy.page                      |    8 ++++-
 6 files changed, 57 insertions(+), 84 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/privacy-history-recent-off.page b/gnome-help/C/privacy-history-recent-off.page
index 9f00ddb..9ba5f9c 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/privacy-history-recent-off.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/privacy-history-recent-off.page
@@ -1,22 +1,23 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
-      xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="privacy-history-recent-off">
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="privacy"/>
+    <link type="guide" xref="files#more-file-tasks"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.8" date="2013-03-11" status="final"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-30" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Jim Campbell</name>
-      <email its:translate="no">jwcampbell gmail com</email>
+      <email>jwcampbell gmail com</email>
     </credit>
     <credit type="editor">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
-      <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
@@ -27,13 +28,13 @@
 
   <title>Turn off or limit file history tracking</title>
   
-  <p>Tracking recently-used files and folders can make it easier to
-  find items that you have been working on, but you may wish to keep
-  these items private.</p>
+  <p>Tracking recently used files and folders makes it easier to find
+  items that you have been working on in the file manager and in file
+  dialogs in applications. You may wish to keep your file usage history
+  pvivate instead, or only track your very recent history.</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <title>To turn off the file history tracking features of your
-    desktop:</title>
+    <title>Turn off file history tracking</title>
     <item>
       <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui> overview and
       start typing <gui>Privacy</gui>.</p>
@@ -59,7 +60,7 @@
   about the web sites you visit.</p></note>
 
   <steps>
-    <title>To restrict the amount of time your file history is tracked:</title>
+    <title>Restrict the amount of time your file history is tracked</title>
     <item>
       <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui> overview and
       start typing <gui>Privacy</gui>.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/privacy-location.page b/gnome-help/C/privacy-location.page
index 5d60993..9d2b310 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/privacy-location.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/privacy-location.page
@@ -1,15 +1,15 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
-      xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="privacy-location">
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="privacy" group="#last"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-10-13" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-30" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
-      <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
       <years>2014</years>
     </credit>
 
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
   a great deal of precision.</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <title>To turn off the geolocation features of your desktop:</title>
+    <title>Turn off the geolocation features of your desktop</title>
     <item>
       <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui> overview and
       start typing <gui>Privacy</gui>.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/privacy-purge.page b/gnome-help/C/privacy-purge.page
index 6368ec2..8fdc18d 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/privacy-purge.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/privacy-purge.page
@@ -1,22 +1,28 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
-      xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="privacy-purge">
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="privacy"/>
+    <link type="guide" xref="files#more-file-tasks"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-09-29" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-10-12" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-30" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Jim Campbell</name>
-      <email its:translate="no">jwcampbell gmail com</email>
+      <email>jwcampbell gmail com</email>
     </credit>
     <credit type="editor">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
-      <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Shaun McCance</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <years>2015</years>
     </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
@@ -33,9 +39,12 @@
   your temporary files, but you can also set your computer to automatically
   do this for you.</p>
 
+  <p>Temporary files are files created automatically by applications in the
+  background. They can increase performance by providing a copy of data that
+  was downloaded or computed.</p>
+
   <steps>
-    <title>Automatically empty your trash and clear your temporary files after
-    a set period of time:</title>
+    <title>Automatically empty your trash and clear temporary files</title>
     <item>
       <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui> overview and
       start typing <gui>Privacy</gui>.</p>
@@ -60,20 +69,11 @@
       <p>Use the <gui>Empty Trash</gui> or <gui>Purge Temporary Files</gui>
       buttons to perform these actions immediately.</p>
     </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Click the <gui>X</gui> to close.</p>
-    </item>
   </steps>
 
-  <note style="warning">
-    <p>Use the <em>Purge After: Immediately</em> setting with caution. Setting
-    your trash to be purged immediately will cause any files you delete to skip
-    your trash and be permanently deleted. Files that are deleted are much more
-    difficult to recover than files that are in your trash.</p>
-
-    <p>Unless you have a specific need to immediately delete files from your
-    trash, it is probably safer to set a longer <gui>Purge After</gui>
-    value.</p>
+  <note style="tip">
+    <p>You can delete files immediately and permanently without using the Trash.
+    See <link xref="files-delete#permanent"/> for information.</p>
   </note>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/privacy-screen-lock.page b/gnome-help/C/privacy-screen-lock.page
index 4923b01..92302f3 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/privacy-screen-lock.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/privacy-screen-lock.page
@@ -1,8 +1,7 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="utf-8"?>
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
-  xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
-  type="topic" style="task"
-  id="privacy-screen-lock">
+      type="topic" style="task"
+      id="privacy-screen-lock">
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="privacy"/>
@@ -12,18 +11,19 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.8" date="2013-05-21" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-10-12" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-30" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
-      <email its:translate="no">shaunm gnome org</email>
+      <email>shaunm gnome org</email>
     </credit>
     <credit type="editor">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
-      <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
     <credit>
       <name>Jim Campbell</name>
-      <email its:translate="no">jwcampbell gmail com</email>
+      <email>jwcampbell gmail com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
 
@@ -38,9 +38,9 @@
   <p>When you leave your computer, you should
   <link xref="shell-exit#lock-screen">lock the screen</link> to prevent
   other people from using your desktop and accessing your files. If you
-  sometimes forget to lock your screen, you may wish to have your computer's
+  sometimes forget to lock your screen, you may wish to have your computerʼs
   screen lock automatically after a set period of time. This will help to
-  secure your computer when you aren't using it.</p>
+  secure your computer when you arenʼt using it.</p>
 
   <note><p>When your screen is locked, your applications and system processes
   will continue to run, but you will need to enter your password to begin using
@@ -63,15 +63,21 @@
       <p>Make sure <gui>Automatic Screen Lock</gui> is switched <gui>ON</gui>,
       then select a length of time from the drop-down list.</p>
     </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>To allow notifications to be displayed on the lock screen, switch
-      <gui>Show Notifications</gui> to <gui>ON</gui>.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Click the <gui>X</gui> to close.</p>
-    </item>
   </steps>
 
+  <note style="tip">
+    <p>Applications can present notifications to you that are still displayed
+    on your lock screen. This is convenient, for example, to see if you have
+    any email without unlocking your screen. If youʼre concerned about other
+    people seeing these notifications, switch <gui>Show Notifications</gui>
+    off.</p>
+    <comment>
+      <cite date="2015-09-30">shaunm</cite>
+      <p>TODO: We need docs on the Notifications cc panel to explain the
+      fine-grained controls. When we write that, link here.</p>
+    </comment>
+  </note>
+
   <p>When your screen is locked, and you want to unlock it, press
   <key>Esc</key>, or swipe up from the bottom of the screen with your mouse.
   Then enter your password, and press <key>Enter</key> or click
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/privacy.page b/gnome-help/C/privacy.page
index 90f04c9..462d15b 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/privacy.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/privacy.page
@@ -1,7 +1,10 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
       xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
-      type="guide" style="task 2column"
+      type="guide"
       id="privacy">
+<!--
+TODO: Problem Reporting
+-->
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="prefs"/>
@@ -9,6 +12,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-09-28" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-30" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Jim Campbell</name>
@@ -33,7 +37,7 @@
   
   <p>The <em>Privacy Settings</em> in GNOME help you control whether or not
   certain parts of your desktop are visible to others. You can also
-  use these settings to clear your computer usage history and clean-out
+  use these settings to clear your computer usage history and clean out
   unnecessary files.</p>
 
 </page>
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