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[release-notes/gnome-3-20] Some minor improvements

commit 7d5c0004386da667b08fca491d50cdb7e3a74bd0
Author: Piotr Drąg <piotrdrag gmail com>
Date:   Tue Mar 15 02:36:25 2016 +0100

    Some minor improvements

 help/C/developers.page |   16 ++++++++--------
 help/C/index.page      |   18 +++++++++---------
 help/C/more.page       |   10 +++++-----
 3 files changed, 22 insertions(+), 22 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/developers.page b/help/C/developers.page
index cc44296..3ea5101 100644
--- a/help/C/developers.page
+++ b/help/C/developers.page
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@
     environment. All of these build options (and more) can be found in a new
     build configuration view (see <link
     href="https://blogs.gnome.org/chergert/2016/02/16/build-configurations-and-xdg-app/";>
-    Christian Hergert's blog post</link> for more details).</p>
+    Christian Hergert’s blog post</link> for more details).</p>
     <p>A new multi-process plugin framework is another major new feature for
     3.20. This allows plugins to add a huge range of functionality to Builder,
     including additional autocompletion providers, tools, services, build
@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@
     <p>3.20 is a significant moment for xdg-app, with a number of core features
     being offered in a mature state for the first time. Version 3.20 includes
     <code>xdg-app-builder</code>, a new tool that makes it easy to build apps.
-    Alexander Larsson, xdg-app's lead developer, has written a five part
+    Alexander Larsson, xdg-app’s lead developer, has written a five part
     tutorial on how to use it to build xdg apps
     (<link href="https://blogs.gnome.org/alexl/2016/02/19/building-an-xdg-app-part-1/";>part one</link>,
     <link href="https://blogs.gnome.org/alexl/2016/02/19/building-an-xdg-app-part-2/";>part two</link>,
@@ -99,7 +99,7 @@
     <p>For those who want to try installing and running xdg-apps, a
     collection of nightly GNOME applications is available to try. In addition
     to being a great way to try xdg-app, this is also a great way to test
-    development versions of GNOME applications, and demonstrates xdg-app's
+    development versions of GNOME applications, and demonstrates xdg-app’s
     ability to install multiple different versions of the same application at
     the same time. For more information,
     <link href="https://blogs.gnome.org/alexl/2016/02/11/testing-unstable-gnome-using-xdg-app/";>
@@ -154,13 +154,13 @@
       CSS equivalents. However, the CSS API being introduced in 3.20 will
       remain stable.</p></item>
     </list>
-    <p>CSS theming isn't the only area to be enhanced in GTK+ 3.20:</p>
+    <p>CSS theming is not the only area to be enhanced in GTK+ 3.20:</p>
     <list>
       <item><p><code>GtkShortcutsWindow</code> is a new widget to present an
       overview of keyboard shortcuts and multitouch gestures in your
       application. Groups and pages allow shortcuts to be organized, and a
       search feature comes built in.</p></item>
-      <item><p><code>gtk-query-settings</code> is a new commandline utility to
+      <item><p><code>gtk-query-settings</code> is a new command line utility to
       query GTK+ settings that are visible to your application.</p></item>
       <item><p><code>gtk-builder-tool</code> has a new preview command for
       viewing .ui files.</p></item>
@@ -186,13 +186,13 @@
   <section id="gtk-inspector">
     <title>GTK+ Inspector</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>GTK+'s live inspector has had a number of updates for 3.20:</p>
+    <p>GTK+’s live inspector has had a number of updates for 3.20:</p>
     <list>
       <item><p>The user interface has been polished: the sidebar has been
       replaced by a drop down in order to devote more space to content display,
       and lists and trees have been cleaned up.</p></item>
       <item><p>Device information is now shown in the general tab.</p></item>
-      <item><p>In line with GTK+'s new CSS features, CSS nodes and associated
+      <item><p>In line with GTK+’s new CSS features, CSS nodes and associated
       style information are now displayed.</p></item>
       <item><p>It is now possible to highlight widgets that are causing resizes.
       </p></item>
@@ -251,7 +251,7 @@
       <code>WHERE {...}</code> syntax is now supported, <code>BIND</code> can
       also be used, and many SPARQL 1.1 builtin functions have been added.</p>
         </item>
-      <item><p>gitg, GNOME's graphical Git client, got a restyled repositories
+      <item><p>gitg, GNOME’s graphical Git client, got a restyled repositories
       list. Commit previews and diffs have also been improved, with new styling
       and integration with system themes (so they are properly styled with the
       dark system theme, for example).</p></item>
diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index 41a29d8..6c7b04a 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -36,8 +36,8 @@
   release incorporates &gitcommits; changes, made by approximately &gitauthors;
   contributors.</p>
 
-  <p>3.20 has been named “Delhi” in recognition of this year's GNOME.Asia
-  organising team. <link href="http://gnome.asia/";>GNOME.Asia</link> is GNOME’s
+  <p>3.20 has been named “Delhi” in recognition of this year’s GNOME.Asia
+  organizing team. <link href="http://gnome.asia/";>GNOME.Asia</link> is GNOME’s
   long-running annual conference in Asia, and is only possible due to the hard
   work of local volunteers.</p>
 
@@ -49,12 +49,12 @@
     new major versions of your operating system. This is the first time that
     GNOME has this ability, and means that you no longer need to do a new
     installation or use a command line tool to get the next version of your
-    distro. It is a major milestone in making GNOME-based systems user friendly
-    and accessible to all.</p>
+    distribution. It is a major milestone in making GNOME-based systems user
+    friendly and accessible to all.</p>
     <p>Upgrading your operating system is simple and convenient. You are
     automatically notified when an upgrade is available to be downloaded, as
     well as when it is ready to be installed. Installation of the upgrade
-    happens while the system isn't running, in order to increase safety and
+    happens while the system is not running, in order to increase safety and
     prevent errors.</p>
   </section>
 
@@ -86,7 +86,7 @@
     search allows you to find specific shortcuts that you might be looking for.
     </p>
     <p>Many GNOME applications have shortcut windows for 3.20, including
-    Files, Videos,  Photos, gedit,  Builder, Maps and more. In each
+    Files, Videos, Photos, gedit, Builder, Maps and more. In each
     application, the shortcut window can be opened from the application menu,
     or by using the <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>?</key></keyseq> or
     <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>F1</key></keyseq> shortcut.</p>
@@ -110,7 +110,7 @@
   <section id="polari">
     <title>Polari</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>3.20 has been a big release for Polari, GNOME's IRC application. The
+    <p>3.20 has been a big release for Polari, GNOME’s IRC application. The
     online paste service feature that was introduced last release has been
     substantially improved: in addition to being able to paste blocks of text
     for sharing, it is now possible to paste images directly into chats, in
@@ -130,7 +130,7 @@
     <p>In addition to these features, 3.20 includes some significant smaller
     changes:</p>
     <list>
-      <item><p>Polari can now handle server passwords (this is  especially
+      <item><p>Polari can now handle server passwords (this is especially
       useful when using <link
       href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/BNC_(software)">bouncers</link>,
       like <link href="http://wiki.znc.in/ZNC";>ZNC</link>).</p></item>
@@ -138,7 +138,7 @@
       new text animations.</p></item>
       <item><p>Status message handling is smarter, in order to minimize noise
       in chatrooms.</p></item>
-      <item><p>More keyboard shortcuts have been added (see Polari's shortcut
+      <item><p>More keyboard shortcuts have been added (see Polari’s shortcut
       window for an overview).</p></item>
     </list>
   </section>
diff --git a/help/C/more.page b/help/C/more.page
index 808c3f7..9700a35 100644
--- a/help/C/more.page
+++ b/help/C/more.page
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@
     <p>Reviews allow applications to be rated, and an average rating is shown for each
     application, allowing you to get an idea at a glance. Software also
     prioritizes the display of most useful reviews, and you can let other users
-    know when you've found a review to be useful by rating it up.</p>
+    know when you have found a review to be useful by rating it up.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="cantarell">
@@ -107,8 +107,8 @@
     <list>
       <item><p>The new scale ruler that is shown on the map.</p></item>
       <item><p>Maps now shows the last viewed location when started, so you
-      don't have to keep navigating back to the same place.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Maps is now able to open location links that use the 'geo:'
+      do not have to keep navigating back to the same place.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Maps is now able to open location links that use the “geo:”
       prefix.</p></item>
       <item><p>Information about roundabouts is now fully provided in
       directions.</p></item>
@@ -120,7 +120,7 @@
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
     <p>Location services makes it possible for applications to find out your
     current location. While this can be extremely useful, it can also be a
-    privacy issue if you don't want other parties to know where you are. For
+    privacy issue if you do not want other parties to know where you are. For
     this reason, it has always been possible to disable location services, in
     order to prevent them from being used by applications. With 3.20, access to
     location services can be decided per application, making these privacy
@@ -156,7 +156,7 @@
     <media type="image" src="figures/web.png"/>
     <p>Web, the GNOME browser, has a new downloads interface. These are now
     show in a popover, that can be accessed from the header bar. This means
-    that downloads don’t get in the way, and you can also easily see previous
+    that downloads do not get in the way, and you can also easily see previous
     downloads.</p>
 
 <!-- TODO: add other items for web, especially session restore. -->
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