[release-notes/gnome-3-30: 2/21] Update notes

[Link Dupont <link src gnome org>]

commit 44a6041cb63c98a0ace4792a364b017b0f288db4
Author: Link Dupont <link sub-pop net>
Date:   Tue Aug 7 14:31:28 2018 +0000

    Update notes

 help/C/index.page | 40 +++++++++++++---------------------------
 1 file changed, 13 insertions(+), 27 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index c08963d8..14469dbd 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
        <!DOCTYPE page [
-<!ENTITY gnomeversion "3.28">
-<!ENTITY lastversion "3.26">
-<!ENTITY nextversion "3.30">
-<!ENTITY gitcommits "25832">
-<!ENTITY gitauthors "838">
+<!ENTITY gnomeversion "3.30">
+<!ENTITY lastversion "3.28">
+<!ENTITY nextversion "3.32">
+<!ENTITY gitcommits "#####">
+<!ENTITY gitauthors "###">
        ]>
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
       xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
     </license>
   </info>
 
-  <title>Introducing GNOME &gnomeversion;: “Chongqing”</title>
+  <title>Introducing GNOME &gnomeversion;: "CODENAME"</title>
 
   <p>GNOME &gnomeversion; is the latest version of GNOME 3, and is the result
   of 6 months’ hard work by the GNOME community. It contains major new
@@ -32,27 +32,10 @@
   release incorporates &gitcommits; changes, made by approximately &gitauthors;
   contributors.</p>
 
-  <p>&gnomeversion; has been named “Chongqing” in recognition of the team behind <link 
href="https://2017.gnome.asia/";>GNOME.Asia 2017</link>. GNOME.Asia is GNOME’s official annual summit in Asia, 
which is only possible thanks to the hard work of local volunteers. This year’s event was held in Chongqing, 
China, and we’d like to thank everyone who contributed to its success.</p>
-
-<!--
-  <section id="personal-organization">
-    <title>Personal Organization Improvements</title>
-    <media type="image" src="figures/calendar-month-view.png"/>
-    <p>GNOME’s applications that help with personal organization have been improved for 3.28. These 
improvements include:</p>
-    <list>
-      <item><p>In <app>Clocks</app>, it’s now possible to add the UTC timezone to your world 
times.</p></item>
-      <item><p>The <app>Contacts</app> application now allows sorting by either surname or first name. It 
also has a new shortcuts window and a number of interface improvements.</p></item>
-      <item><p>The month view in <app>Calendar</app> has been improved. Events are presented in a way that’s 
easier to read, and it’s now possible to seamlessly expand cells which are overflowing with events.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Weather information has been added to the <app>Calendar</app> application, so it’s possible 
to see the forecast alongside your events.</p></item>
-      <item><p><app>To Do</app> has an updated task view design, which makes it easy to reorder tasks with 
drag and drop. Todoist integration has also been improved.</p></item>
-    </list>
-  </section>
--->
-
   <section id="screen-sharing">
     <title>Screen Sharing Indicator</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>With GNOME 3.30, it is now possible to control screen sharing and remote desktop session through a 
newly added system menu. When screen sharing is enabled, an indicator to that effect is displayed in the 
panel. This works in Wayland and X11 sessions.</p>
+    <p>With GNOME 3.30, it is now possible to control screen sharing and remote desktop session through a 
newly added system menu. When screen sharing is enabled, an indicator to that effect is displayed in the 
panel. And with pipewire, this works in Wayland and X11 sessions.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="web-reader">
@@ -70,22 +53,25 @@
   <section id="software-showcase">
     <title>Improved Software</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>The <app>Software</app> application now showcases featured apps on the home view. <app>Software</app> 
can now update installed Flatpaks automatically.</p>
+    <p>The <app>Software</app> application now showcases multiple featured apps at once using a carousel to 
cycle through them. <app>Software</app> makes it easier to stay up-to-date too; installed Flatpaks can be 
automatically upgraded.</p>
   </section>
   
   <section id="files-search">
     <title>Streamlined Files</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p><app>Files</app>, the GNOME file browser, now features a combined location and search bar. This 
improves the search experience by making the options more obvious.</p>
+    <p><app>Files</app>, the GNOME file browser, features a more streamlined location and search bar. This 
combined search bar improves the search experience in addition to making the options more obvious.</p>
   </section>
   
   <section id="notes-improvements">
     <title>Revamped Notes</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p><app>Notes</app> received some design improvements, making notes more readable and easier to use.</p>
+    <p><app>Notes</app>, the GNOME note-taking application, received some design improvements, making notes 
more readable and easier to use.</p>
   </section>
   
   <section id="games-improvements">
+    <title>Game More!</title>
+    <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
+    <p><app>Games</app>, a retro gaming application, is even easier to use than before. The entire 
application can be navigated by gamepad. The keyboard can now be mapped to gamepad inputs, allowing custom 
keyboard shortcuts when playing the game. The Flatpak also ships with new emulator cores, making it possible 
to now play Game Gear, Master System, Nintendo DS, and Virtual Boy games.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="thats-not-all">