[release-notes/gnome-3-30: 4/21] Move sections into more



commit 2ceda66d4643ddd796435e9758021d86995550ad
Author: Link Dupont <link sub-pop net>
Date:   Tue Aug 7 08:37:06 2018 -0700

    Move sections into more

 help/C/index.page | 28 +++++++++-------------------
 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 19 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index d94e9e84..5c4480e2 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -33,19 +33,19 @@
   contributors.</p>
 
   <section id="screen-sharing">
-    <title>Screen Sharing Indicator</title>
+    <title>Screen Sharing</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>With GNOME 3.30, it is now possible to control screen sharing and remote desktop session through a 
newly added system menu. When screen sharing is enabled, an indicator to that effect is displayed in the 
panel. And with pipewire, this works both in Wayland and X11 sessions.</p>
+    <p>With GNOME 3.30, it is now possible to control screen sharing and remote desktop sessions through a 
newly added system menu. When screen sharing is enabled, an indicator to that effect is displayed in the 
panel. And with pipewire, this works both in Wayland and X11 sessions.</p>
   </section>
   
-  <section id="software-showcase">
+  <section id="software-update">
     <title>Update Automatically</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
     <p><app>Software</app>, the GNOME software manager, now features automatic updating of installed 
Flatpaks. This makes keeping software up to date easier than ever.</p>
   </section>
   
   <section id="thunderbolt">
-    <title>Thunderbolt!</title>
+    <title>Thunderbolt</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
     <p>GNOME 3.30 now supports for Thunderbolt. Newly connected Thunderbolt devices are automatically 
enrolled by the shell via the <em>boltd</em> daemon if the current user is a system administrator and the 
session is unlocked. Subsequent connections of the same device will automatically authorize the device. 
Settings also comes with a new Thunderbolt panel to manage existing device trust levels.</p>
   </section>
@@ -59,23 +59,11 @@
   <section id="boxes-rdp">
     <title>Box Up Your Windows</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p><app>Boxes</app>, the GNOME virtual machine application, can now connect to remote Windows servers 
using the Remote Desktop Protocol (RDP). It also now has the ability to import OVA files, making sharing 
virtual machines even easier.</p>
-  </section>
-  
-  <section id="files-search">
-    <title>Streamlined Files</title>
-    <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p><app>Files</app>, the GNOME file browser, features a more streamlined location and search bar. This 
combined search bar improves the search experience in addition to making the options more obvious.</p>
-  </section>
-  
-  <section id="notes-improvements">
-    <title>Revamped Notes</title>
-    <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p><app>Notes</app>, the GNOME note-taking application, received some design improvements, making notes 
more readable and easier to use.</p>
+    <p><app>Boxes</app>, the GNOME virtual machine application, can now connect  to remote Windows servers 
using the Remote Desktop Protocol (RDP). Boxes also now has the ability to import OVA files, making sharing 
virtual machines even easier.</p>
   </section>
   
   <section id="games-improvements">
-    <title>Game More!</title>
+    <title>Even More Games</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
     <p><app>Games</app>, a retro gaming application, is even easier to use than before. The entire 
application can be navigated by gamepad. The keyboard can now be mapped to gamepad inputs, allowing custom 
keyboard shortcuts when playing the game. The Flatpak also ships with new emulator cores, making it possible 
to now play Game Gear, Master System, Nintendo DS, and Virtual Boy games.</p>
   </section>
@@ -85,9 +73,11 @@
     <p>As usual, there are also many other smaller improvements in this GNOME
     release. Here are some of them!</p>
     <list>
+      <item><p><app>Files</app>, the GNOME file browser, features a more streamlined location and search 
bar.</p></item>
       <item><p><app>Settings</app> now dynamically shows hardware-related panels only when relevant hardware 
is detected.</p></item>
       <item><p>The <app>Initial Setup Assistant</app> has an improved avatar selection interface.</p></item>
-      <item><p>GTK+ features a new Emoji input system. When enabled, typing <pre>:xyz<TAB></pre> opens an 
Emoji selection view.</p></item>
+      <item><p><app>Notes</app>, the GNOME note-taking application, received some design improvements, 
making notes more readable and easier to use.</p></item>
+      <item><p>GTK+ features a new Emoji input system. When enabled, typing <pre>:xyz</pre> followed by 
<pre>TAB</pre> opens an Emoji selection view.</p></item>
     </list>
   </section>
 


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