[gnome-user-docs] net-findip: Update 3.37 and improve



commit a9cf207fa07c96278bf6188c17bc3bd49132d32d
Author: Rafael Fontenelle <rafaelff gnome org>
Date:   Thu Aug 6 18:22:29 2020 -0300

    net-findip: Update 3.37 and improve
    
    - Update instructions for the different sidebar labels Network
      and Wi-Fi
    - Add note about "Wired" not showing up if more than on type
      of wired connection is available (used USB and PCI Ethernet)

 gnome-help/C/net-findip.page | 49 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++--------
 1 file changed, 40 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-findip.page b/gnome-help/C/net-findip.page
index 8923af6a..ce292278 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-findip.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-findip.page
@@ -10,6 +10,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.2" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-10-30" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.37.3" date="2020-08-05" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -27,6 +28,10 @@
       <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
       <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Rafael Fontenelle</name>
+      <email>rafaelff gnome org</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -41,24 +46,50 @@
   IP address for your computer on the internet.</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <title>Find your internal (network) IP address</title>
+    <title>Find your wired connection's internal (network) IP address</title>
     <item>
       <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui> overview and
-      start typing <gui>Network</gui>.</p>
+      start typing <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click on <gui>Network</gui> to open the panel.</p>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Choose which connection, <gui>Wi-Fi</gui> or <gui>Wired</gui>, from
-      the left pane.</p>
-      <p>The IP address for a wired connection will be displayed on the
-      right.</p>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Network</gui> in the sidebar to open the panel.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>The IP address for a <gui>Wired</gui> connection will be displayed
+      on the right along with some information.</p>
       
       <p>Click the
       <media its:translate="no" type="image" src="figures/emblem-system-symbolic.svg"><span 
its:translate="yes">settings</span></media>
-      button to see the IP address for the wireless network in the
-      <gui>Details</gui> panel.</p>
+      button for more details on your connection.</p>
+    </item>
+  </steps>
+
+  <note style="info">
+    <p its:locNote="TRANSLATORS: See NetworkManager for 'PCI', 'USB' and 'Ethernet'">
+    If more than one type of wired connected is available, you might see
+    names like <gui>PCI Ethernet</gui> or <gui>USB Ethernet</gui> instead
+    of <gui>Wired</gui>.</p>
+  </note>
+
+  <steps>
+    <title>Find your wireless connection's internal (network) IP address</title>
+    <item>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Wi-Fi</gui> in the sidebar to open the panel.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click the
+      <media its:translate="no" type="image" src="figures/emblem-system-symbolic.svg"><span 
its:translate="yes">settings</span></media>
+      for the IP address and more details on your connection.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 


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