[release-notes] random edits

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commit 520677dcf5dc3d70edba4384f091bfc94c725fef
Author: Link Dupont <link sub-pop net>
Date:   Fri Sep 4 06:33:22 2020 -0400

    random edits

 help/C/index.page | 64 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++----------------------------
 1 file changed, 31 insertions(+), 33 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index e4125039..4218e74c 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -32,50 +32,51 @@
   release incorporates &gitcommits; changes, made by approximately &gitauthors;
   contributors.</p>
   
-  <p>3.38 has been named “Orbis” in recognition of the team behind GUADEC 2020.
-  GUADEC is GNOME’s annual conference, which is only possible thanks to the hard
-  work of many volunteers. This year’s event was meant to be held in Zacatecas,
-  Mexico, but had to be moved online due to the pandemic. We are very much
-  looking forward to meeting in Mexico in the near future.</p>
-
-  <section>
+  <p>&gnomeversion; has been named “Orbis” in recognition of the team behind
+  GUADEC 2020. GUADEC is GNOME’s annual conference, which is only possible
+  thanks to the hard work of many volunteers. This year’s event was meant to be
+  held in Zacatecas, Mexico, but had to be moved online due to the COVID-19
+  pandemic. We are very much looking forward to meeting in Mexico in the near
+  future.</p>
+
+  <section id="drag-reorder">
     <title>Drag to Reorder Apps</title>
     <p>GNOME 3.38 replaces the split Frequent and All apps views with one
     consistent view that allows you to order apps however you like. Simply click
     and drag to move apps around.</p>
   </section>
 
-  <section>
+  <section id="gnome-tour">
     <title>New “Welcome” tour</title>
-    <p>GNOME 3.38 comes with a new “Welcome” tour, which gets shown on first
-    run, after the initial setup. The tour is primarily there to provide onboarding
-    for new users, but it also serves to give a nice welcome to users in their first
-    session.</p>
+    <p>GNOME 3.38 comes with a new “Welcome” tour, shown at first login, after
+    the initial setup. The tour primarily provides onboarding for new users, but
+    it also serves to give a nice welcome to users in their first session.</p>
     <media type="image" src="figures/welcome-tour.png">Welcome tour</media>
-    <p>The Welcome tour is an example of a GNOME application that is written in Rust.</p>
+    <p>The Welcome tour is an example of a GNOME application that is written in
+    Rust.</p>
   </section>
 
-  <section>
+  <section id="settings">
     <title>Settings</title>
     <p>XXX</p>
   </section>
 
-  <section>
+  <section id="screen-recording">
     <title>Improved Screen Recording</title>
     <p>Under the covers, the screen recording infrastructure in GNOME Shell
     has been improved to take advantage of PipeWire and kernel APIs to reduce
     resource consumption and improve responsiveness.</p>
   </section>
 
-  <section>
+  <section id="multi-monitor">
     <title>Better Multi-Monitor Support</title>
     <p>GNOME Shell can now <link 
href="https://blogs.gnome.org/shell-dev/2020/07/02/splitting-up-the-frame-clock/";>
     drive multiple monitors with different refresh rates</link>, making sure
-    that you get the best possible experience out of your
-    desktop. This improvement is only available in Wayland sessions.</p>
+    that you get the best possible experience out of your desktop. This
+    improvement is only available in Wayland sessions.</p>
   </section>
 
-  <section>
+  <section id="epiphany">
     <title>A Better Browsing Experience</title>
     <p>GNOME Web now features Intelligent Tracking Prevention, a collection of
     advanced mitigations designed to protect users from cross-site tracking.
@@ -93,7 +94,7 @@
     you visit.</p>
   </section>
 
-  <section>
+  <section id="maps">
     <title>Adaptive Maps</title>
     <p>Maps is now adaptive for mobile use. When the window is narrow, the
     routing sidebar will now be shown in a separate view, with a back button
@@ -103,44 +104,41 @@
     <media type="image" width="940" src="figures/maps.png">GNOME Maps</media>
   </section>
 
-  <section>
+  <section id="clocks">
     <title>Clocks</title>
     <p>The “Add World Clock” dialog has been redesigned. Additionally, it is
     now possible to set a snooze and ring duration for alarms.</p>
     <media type="image" src="figures/clocks.png">GNOME Clocks</media>
   </section>
 
-  <section>
+  <section id="fractal">
     <title>Fractal</title>
     <p>XXX</p>
   </section>
 
-  <section>
+  <section id="games">
     <title>Games</title>
     <p>XXX</p>
   </section>
 
-  <section>
+  <section id="utilities">
     <title>Utilities</title>
     <p>Several utilities have been redesigned to provide a more polished and
     elegant experience. This includes Screenshot and Sound Recorder.</p>
     <media type="image" src="figures/screenshot-and-sound-recorder.png">Screenshot and Sound Recorder</media>
   </section>
 
-  <section>
-    <title>Icons</title>
-    <p>XXX New icon for Cheese, Tali, Sudoku, Robots, Quadrapassel, Nibbles, and Calculator</p>
-  </section>
-
   <section id="thats-not-all">
     <title>And That’s Not All…</title>
     <p>As usual, there are also many other smaller improvements in this GNOME
     release. Here are some of them!</p>
     <list>
-      <item><p>Terminal now uses an updated text color scheme, which looks
-      better and is easier to read thanks to improved color contrast.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Photos has gained a new image filter, Trencin, which is similar
-      to Instagram’s Clarendon filter.</p>/</item>
+      <item><p>Calculator, Cheese, Tali, Sudoku, Robots, Quadrapassel, and
+      Nibbles all feature new icons.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Terminal now uses an updated text color scheme. The new colors
+      look better and are easier to read thanks to improved color contrast.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Photos has gained a new image filter, Trencin, very similar to
+      Instagram’s Clarendon filter.</p>/</item>
       <item><p>The system menu has a new Restart option, which also can be used
       to go to the Boot menu by holding down the <key>Alt</key> key.</p></item>
       <item><p>XXX tracker features for users</p></item>