[release-notes] Polish throughout

[Michael Catanzaro <mcatanzaro src gnome org>]

commit 16e05c65a6e1317fc00efc0f4afec4975bdcf652
Author: Michael Catanzaro <mcatanzaro gnome org>
Date:   Tue Sep 8 10:45:52 2020 -0500

    Polish throughout

 help/C/developers.page | 12 ++++++------
 help/C/index.page      | 28 ++++++++++++++--------------
 2 files changed, 20 insertions(+), 20 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/developers.page b/help/C/developers.page
index a9388c59..3b3e09ee 100644
--- a/help/C/developers.page
+++ b/help/C/developers.page
@@ -44,10 +44,10 @@
     <title>GNOME OS</title>
     <p>GNOME OS is a virtual machine image designed to facilitate development
     and testing of GNOME. It is not intended to replace traditional Linux
-    distributions. To try out GNOME OS for yourself, follow <link href="#">these
-    instructions</link>. Due to recent changes in <app>Boxes</app>’s support for
-    UEFI, you must use <app>Boxes</app> 3.38 to run GNOME OS images; older
-    versions of <app>Boxes</app> will not work.</p>
+    distributions. <link href="https://gnome-build-meta.s3.amazonaws.com/3.38.0/gnome_os_installer.iso";>
+    Try out GNOME OS for yourself.</link> Due to recent changes in
+    <app>Boxes</app>’s support for UEFI, you must use <app>Boxes</app> 3.38 to
+    run GNOME OS images; older versions of <app>Boxes</app> will not work.</p>
     <media type="image" src="figures/welcome-to-gnome-os.png">GNOME OS Welcome</media>
   </section>
 
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@
     <p>libhandy is a library providing high-quality GTK widgets with a
     focus on adaptive and mobile-friendly user interfaces. GNOME 3.38 includes
     libhandy 1.0, which brings many new widgets, such as <code>HdyDeck</code>
-    and <code>HdyWindow</code>. libhandy 1.0 release is parallel-installable
+    and <code>HdyWindow</code>. The libhandy 1.0 release is parallel-installable
     with the earlier libhandy 0.0 API series.</p>
   </section>
 
@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@
       <cmd>rust-analyzer</cmd>
       instead of <cmd>rls</cmd>.</p></item>
       <item><p>Support for tracing with sysprof has been integrated in GLib,
-      libsoup and pango.</p></item>
+      libsoup, and pango.</p></item>
       <item><p>Glade now supports GJS widgets, automatic loading of composition
       templates, and improved deprecation checks using version data from
       introspection.</p></item>
diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index 20968790..82e4c125 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -47,13 +47,13 @@
   </section>
 
   <section id="gnome-tour">
-    <title>New “Welcome” tour</title>
-    <p>GNOME 3.38 comes with a new “Welcome” tour, shown at first login, after
-    the initial setup. The tour primarily provides onboarding for new users, but
-    it also serves to give a nice welcome to users in their first session.</p>
+    <title>New Welcome Tour</title>
+    <p>GNOME 3.38 comes with a new <app>Welcome</app> tour, shown at first
+    login, after the initial setup. The tour primarily provides onboarding for
+    new users, but it also serves to give a nice welcome to users in their
+    first session.</p>
     <media type="image" src="figures/welcome-tour.png">Welcome tour</media>
-    <p>The Welcome tour is an example of a GNOME application that is written in
-    Rust.</p>
+    <p>The <app>Welcome</app> tour is written in Rust.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="settings">
@@ -131,13 +131,13 @@
     <app>Games</app> now supports Nintendo 64 games as a result of some
     improvements to <sys>libretro</sys>. Finally, <app>Games</app> is more
     stable now, running games in a secondary process. If a game or emulator
-    crashes now, the main application won't.</p>
+    crashes now, the main application won’t.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="utilities">
     <title>Utilities</title>
     <p><app>Screenshot</app> and <app>Sound Recorder</app> have been redesigned
-    to provide a more polished and elegant experience. This includes .</p>
+    to provide a more polished and elegant experience.</p>
     <media type="image" src="figures/screenshot-and-sound-recorder.png">Screenshot and Sound Recorder</media>
   </section>
 
@@ -163,12 +163,12 @@
       application sandbox more secure by allowing control over what kinds of
       data your apps can search and query.</p></item>
       <item><p><app>Fractal</app> has improved video playback in the message
-      history. Previews of videos are now shown directly message, and clicking
-      on a video will open it in a larger viewer. Audio files are now seekable
-      in the improvde audio file player. The message history has been improved
-      too. Edited messages are now edited in place, with an icon to indicate the
-      edited status, while redacted messages are now deleted from the message
-      history entirely.</p></item>
+      history. Previews of videos are now shown directly in the message history,
+      and clicking on a video will open it in a larger viewer. Audio files are
+      now seekable in the improved audio file player. Edited messages are now
+      edited in place, with an icon to indicate the edited status, while
+      redacted messages are now deleted from the message history
+      entirely.</p></item>
     </list>
   </section>