[gimp-web] content: fix GIMP 2.10.28 news.

[Jehan <jehanp src gnome org>]

commit 0b9d156a70f24fb9b0c08eb18f5c363da0e55e8b
Author: Jehan <jehan girinstud io>
Date:   Tue Sep 14 22:31:07 2021 +0200

    content: fix GIMP 2.10.28 news.
    
    Thanks to Liam for intro rewording, and adding Windows fixes in "In
    brief" section.
    
    Thanks to woob for proposing to clean out the "(displayed as “Edge
    handling” to the user)" text (the precision made more sense when the
    prop name was very different).
    
    Also fixing an unclosed parenthese.

 content/news/2021/2021-09-07/index.md | 18 +++++++++---------
 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/content/news/2021/2021-09-07/index.md b/content/news/2021/2021-09-07/index.md
index 490ce936..d9df5c99 100644
--- a/content/news/2021/2021-09-07/index.md
+++ b/content/news/2021/2021-09-07/index.md
@@ -5,9 +5,8 @@ Authors: Wilber
 Slug: gimp-2-10-28-released
 Summary: "More bug fixes"
 
-GIMP 2.10.28 has been released, this time really a nearly-full bug fixes
-release as no fancy new feature is present. We focus on stability of the
-2.10 series while making deeper changes on the development branch.
+GIMP 2.10.28 is now released. This is a bug-fix release, because most of
+our work is now concentrated on the development version.
 
 *Note: you may have noticed we skipped GIMP 2.10.26. A build bug has
 been discovered just after tagging the release. GIMP 2.10.28 is the same
@@ -15,6 +14,8 @@ without the bug. We recommend against building and using GIMP 2.10.26.*
 
 # In brief
 
+- Bug fixes for GIMP on Windows; see [below for
+  details](#windows-is-getting-some-love).
 - The `Dashboard` dockable now has memory support in OpenBSD.
 - Performance improvements for GIMP on macOS Big Sur were applied in our
   macOS packages since GIMP 2.10.22 as experiments. We felt confident
@@ -109,7 +110,7 @@ longstanding issues of GIMP in Windows finally got fixed:
   "*reduced-resolution image*". If you experience such disagreement,
   please report to these other software so that they check the SubFile
   type of the pages they open (as per [TIFF
-  specification](https://www.adobe.io/content/dam/udp/en/open/standards/tiff/TIFF6.pdf).
+  specification](https://www.adobe.io/content/dam/udp/en/open/standards/tiff/TIFF6.pdf)).
   ([#3740](https://gitlab.gnome.org/GNOME/gimp/-/issues/3740))
 - *GIMP used to prevent some software to open, when these software needed
   to watch some specific directory*, because `GLib` was reading directory
@@ -163,11 +164,10 @@ As usual, this release is supplemented with the releases of
 
 In GEGL in particular, the following operations were improved:
 
- - distance-transform: new `edge_handling` parameter (displayed as
-   "*Edge handling*" to the user), allowing users to choose whether
-   areas outside the input are to be treated as above threshold or below
-   threshold (i.e. infinitely white or black respectively) for
-   calculating distance. *(by woob)*
+ - distance-transform: new `edge_handling` parameter, allowing users to
+   choose whether areas outside the input are to be treated as above
+   threshold or below threshold (i.e. infinitely white or black
+   respectively) for calculating distance. *(by woob)*
  - negative-darkroom: contrast boost and illuminant adjustment
    parameter, reworked emulsion dye model, UI improvements, more black
    and white paper presets and some operation speed-up. *(by JonnyRobbie