same-gnome documentation......

[John Hornbeck <hornbeck freeshell org>]

Hello, Shaun McCance assigned me the same-gnome docs to update and I
would like to submit the following to make sure I am doing this right. 
Please critique the doc and let me know how to better move forward.

Thank you,
John Hornbeck

Index: same-gnome.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/gnome/gnome-games/same-gnome/help/C/same-gnome.xml,v
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diff -r1.10 same-gnome.xml
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<   <!ENTITY appversion "2.6">
<   <!ENTITY manrevision "2.6">
---
>   <!ENTITY appversion "2.8">
>   <!ENTITY manrevision "2.8">
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<     <title>&app; Manual V&manrevision;</title>       
---
>     <title>&app; Manual </title>       
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< 	  The menus on the menubar contain all of the commands you need to
< 	  play <application>&app;</application>.
---
> 	  The menubar contains the following menus:
> 	<itemizedlist>
> 	<listitem><para>
> 	Game: The game menu contains the start button allowing you to start a new game,
> 	the scores button allowing you to view the best scores of old games and a quit button allowing you to exit &app;.
> 	</para></listitem>
> 	<listitem><para>
> 	Settings: The settings menu contains the preferences button, allowing you to customize the stones of &app;.
> 	</para></listitem>
> 	<listitem><para>
> 	Help: The help menu contains the contents button and a about button.  The contents button will leed you to this help
> 	menu, while the about menu will give you information about &app; itself.
> 	</para></listitem>
> 	</itemizedlist>