personal pronouns
- From: Craig Keogh <cskeogh adam com au>
- To: gnome-doc-list gnome org
- Subject: personal pronouns
- Date: Fri, 06 Aug 2010 17:25:13 +0930
I do not like personal pronouns (you, your, he, she) in documentation.
The GNOME style guidelines [1] doesn't say much about personal pronouns,
but 'Topic 2 Passive Voice' [1] suggests it. Active voice is good. Using
'you' is not.
Fedora's guidelines [2] state avoid personal pronouns. To steal Fedora's
example:
BAD:
"Edit your yum configuration files to use geographically close mirrors."
GOOD:
"Edit the yum configuration files"
I've been seeing a lot of personal pronouns in the new Mallard
documentation. Thoughts?
--
Craig Keogh <cskeogh adam com au>
[1]
http://library.gnome.org/devel/gdp-style-guide/stable/locale-5.html.en
[2]
http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs_Project_Style_Guide_-_General_Guidelines
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