Fwd: Generating candidate versions of files-tilde.page and files-hidden.page

[Aline Bessa <alibezz gmail com>]

Hi everybody,

That's my first contribution for the GNOME documentation project and I'm quite sure that this is just the beginning!

I would like to thank Phill Bull and j1mc for the advices.

I think I'll follow j1mc advice and keep generating candidate versions for the next week, but if you have any better ideas for this new contributor here, please let me know!

Thanks in advance,

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Aline Bessa
GNU/Linux Registered User #452373

From 853acd740e419b7fb6d9a2e9a39477c7a8d9bedd Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: alibezz <alibezz gmail com>
Date: Fri, 1 Apr 2011 00:15:00 -0300
Subject: [PATCH] Generating candidate version for files-tilde.page

---
 gnome-help/C/files-tilde.page |    7 ++++---
 1 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/gnome-help/C/files-tilde.page b/gnome-help/C/files-tilde.page
index 14061c5..727bb1e 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/files-tilde.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/files-tilde.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     <link type="seealso" xref="files-hidden"/>
     <desc>These are backup files. They are hidden by default.</desc>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="1.0" date="2011-02-25" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="1.0" date="2011-02-25" status="candidate"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
       <email>philbull gmail com</email>
@@ -20,9 +20,10 @@
 <title>What is a file with a "~" at the end of its name?</title>
 
 <note>
-<p>These files are hidden by default. You are able to view them because you either selected <guiseq><gui>View</gui><gui>Hidden Files</gui></guiseq> or pressed <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>H</key></keyseq>.  You can hide them again by following those steps again. </p> 
+<p>Files with a "~" at the end of their names (for example, <file>example.txt~</file>) are automatically created backup copies of documents edited in <app>Gedit</app>, the <gui>Gnome Text Editor</gui>, as well as in other applications. It is normally safe to delete them, but there really is no need to. </p>
+
+<p>These files are hidden by default. If you are seeing them, that is because you either selected <guiseq><gui>View</gui><gui>Hidden Files</gui></guiseq> or pressed <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>H</key></keyseq>. You can hide them again by repeating one of these steps. </p> 
 </note>
-<p>Files with "~" at the end of their names (for example, <file>example.txt~</file>) are automatically created backup copies of documents edited in <app>Gedit</app>, the <gui>Gnome Text Editor</gui>, as well as other applications. It is normally safe to delete them, but there really is no need to.  You can just click <guiseq><gui>View</gui><gui>Hidden Files</gui></guiseq> to hide them.</p>
 
 <p>These files are treated in the same way as normal hidden files. See <link xref="files-hidden"/> for advice on dealing with hidden files.</p>
 
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1.6.0.4

From 472ceee9adbfc95674831d75cb9fbc840989cd20 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: alibezz <alibezz gmail com>
Date: Thu, 31 Mar 2011 23:51:55 -0300
Subject: [PATCH] Generating a candidate version of files-hidden.page

---
 gnome-help/C/files-hidden.page |    6 +++---
 1 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/gnome-help/C/files-hidden.page b/gnome-help/C/files-hidden.page
index 810c6fa..3863fc3 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/files-hidden.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/files-hidden.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="files#faq"/>
     <desc>Make a file invisible, so you can't see it in the file manager.</desc>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="1.0" date="2011-03-29" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="1.0" date="2011-03-29" status="candidate"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
       <email>philbull gmail com</email>
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@
 <section id="show-hidden">
  <title>Show all hidden files</title>
  <p>
- If you want to see all of the hidden files in a folder, go to that folder  and click <guiseq><gui>View</gui><gui>Show Hidden Files</gui></guiseq>. All of the hidden files will be shown along with the files that were not hidden.
+ If you want to see all hidden files in a folder, go to that folder and click <guiseq><gui>View</gui><gui>Show Hidden Files</gui></guiseq>. All hidden files will be shown along with the files that were not hidden.
  </p>
  <p>
   Some hidden files will have a "." at the beginning of their name. Others might have a "~" at the end of their name instead (see <link xref="files-tilde"/>).
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@
  To unhide a file, go to the folder containing the hidden file and click <guiseq><gui>View</gui><gui>Show Hidden Files</gui></guiseq>. Then, find the hidden file and rename it so that it doesn't have a "." in front of its name.
  </p>
  <p>
- For example, to unhide a file called <file>.example.txt</file>, you would rename it to <file>example.txt</file>.
+ For example, to unhide a file called <file>.example.txt</file>, you should rename it to <file>example.txt</file>.
  </p>
  <p>
  Once you have renamed the file, click <guiseq><gui>View</gui><gui>Show Hidden Files</gui></guiseq> to hide any other hidden files again.
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1.6.0.4


From 422f5a7bd46742d7ceea6b3f0208d1475301cff7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: alibezz <alibezz gmail com>
Date: Fri, 1 Apr 2011 00:01:37 -0300
Subject: [PATCH] Adding Ctrl + H information and making some little reviews

---
 gnome-help/C/files-hidden.page |    8 ++++----
 1 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/gnome-help/C/files-hidden.page b/gnome-help/C/files-hidden.page
index 3863fc3..f2ca50f 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/files-hidden.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/files-hidden.page
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
 
 <p>You can hide files by renaming them with a <key>.</key> at the beginning of their name. Hidden files are invisible by default; they are not displayed in the file manager, but they are still there in the folder.</p>
 
-<p>To hide a file, <link xref="files-rename">rename it</link> with a "." at the beginning of its name. For example, to hide a file <file>example.txt</file>, you would rename it to <file>.example.txt</file>.</p>
+<p>To hide a file, <link xref="files-rename">rename it</link> with a "." at the beginning of its name. For example, to hide a file <file>example.txt</file>, you should rename it to <file>.example.txt</file>.</p>
 
 <note style="tip">
  <p>You can hide folders in the same way that you can hide files. Rename the folder with a "." at the beginning of its name.</p>
@@ -29,13 +29,13 @@
 <section id="show-hidden">
  <title>Show all hidden files</title>
  <p>
- If you want to see all hidden files in a folder, go to that folder and click <guiseq><gui>View</gui><gui>Show Hidden Files</gui></guiseq>. All hidden files will be shown along with the files that were not hidden.
+ If you want to see all hidden files in a folder, go to that folder and either click <guiseq><gui>View</gui><gui>Show Hidden Files</gui></guiseq> or press <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>H</key></keyseq>. All hidden files will be shown along with the files that were not hidden.
  </p>
  <p>
   Some hidden files will have a "." at the beginning of their name. Others might have a "~" at the end of their name instead (see <link xref="files-tilde"/>).
  </p>
  <p>
- To hide these files again, click <guiseq><gui>View</gui><gui>Show Hidden Files</gui></guiseq> again.
+ To hide these files again, either click <guiseq><gui>View</gui><gui>Show Hidden Files</gui></guiseq> or press <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>H</key></keyseq> again.
  </p>
 </section>
 
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@
  For example, to unhide a file called <file>.example.txt</file>, you should rename it to <file>example.txt</file>.
  </p>
  <p>
- Once you have renamed the file, click <guiseq><gui>View</gui><gui>Show Hidden Files</gui></guiseq> to hide any other hidden files again.
+ Once you have renamed the file, you can either click <guiseq><gui>View</gui><gui>Show Hidden Files</gui></guiseq> or press <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>H</key></keyseq> to hide any other hidden files again.
  </p>
 </section>
 
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1.6.0.4