Generating candidate version for net-manual.page

[Aline Bessa <alibezz gmail com>]

Hi everybody,

I'm generating candidate versions for the * pages I found here

http://www.mail-archive.com/gnome-doc-list gnome org/msg06037.html

that were under "review" status.

net-manual.page was one of them.

Here's the patch.

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Aline Bessa
GNU/Linux Registered User #452373

From b1a3978eb4cd37a61c3953b213d36148adeb824a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: alibezz <alibezz gmail com>
Date: Mon, 4 Apr 2011 19:12:30 -0300
Subject: [PATCH] Generating candidate version for net-manual.page

---
 gnome-help/C/net-manual.page |   18 +++++++++---------
 1 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-manual.page b/gnome-help/C/net-manual.page
index 9d28b05..cb58d07 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-manual.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-manual.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="net-manual">
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-01" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
@@ -21,32 +21,32 @@
 
 <steps>
  <item>
-  <p>Click the network icon on the top bar and click <gui>Edit Connections</gui>.</p>
+  <p>Click on the network icon on the top bar and click on <gui>Edit Connections</gui>.</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
-  <p>Find the network connection that you want to set-up manually. For example, if you plug-in to the network with a cable, look at the <gui>Wired</gui> tab.</p>
+  <p>Find the network connection that you want to setup manually. For example, if you plugin to the network with a cable, look at the <gui>Wired</gui> tab.</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
-  <p>Click the connection you want to edit to select it, then click <gui>Edit</gui>.</p>
+  <p>Click on the connection you want to edit and then click on the <gui>Edit</gui> option.</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
-  <p>Go to the <gui>IPv4 Settings</gui> tab and change the <gui>Method</gui> to <gui>Manual</gui>.</p>
+  <p>Go to the <gui>IPv4 Settings</gui> tab and change the <gui>Method</gui> option to <gui>Manual</gui>.</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
-  <p>Click <gui>Add</gui> and type the <em>IP address</em>, <em>network mask</em> and <em>default gateway IP address</em> into the columns in the <gui>Addresses</gui> list. Press <key>Enter</key> when you've finished typing each address.</p>
-  <p>All three of these addresses must be "IP addresses", which will be four numbers separated by periods (e.g. 123.45.6.78).</p>
+  <p>Click on the <gui>Add</gui> option and type the <em>IP address</em>, <em>network mask</em> and <em>default gateway IP address</em> into the corresponding columns of the <gui>Addresses</gui> list. Press <key>Enter</key> or <key>Tab</key> after typing each address.</p>
+  <p>These three addresses must be IP addresses, i.e. they must be four numbers separated by periods (e.g. 123.45.6.78).</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
-  <p>Type the IP addresses of the DNS servers you want to use, separated by commas.</p>
+  <p>Type the IP addresses of the DNS servers you want to use in the corresponding field, separated by commas.</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
-  <p>Click <gui>Save</gui>. If you are not connected to the network, go to the network icon on the top bar and connect to it. Test the network settings by trying to visit a website or look at shared files on the network, for example.</p>
+  <p>Click on <gui>Save</gui>. If you are not connected to the network, go to the network icon on the top bar and connect to it. Test the network settings by trying to visit a website or look at shared files on the network, for example.</p>
  </item>
  
 </steps>
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