[patch] Desktop Help minor file manager corrections
- From: Jeremy Bicha <jbicha ubuntu com>
- To: gnome-doc-list gnome org
- Subject: [patch] Desktop Help minor file manager corrections
- Date: Thu, 4 Aug 2011 19:56:02 -0400
Hi, here's my first patch for GNOME documentation. These are a few
things in the file manager pages I corrected in the Desktop Help while
preparing the Ubuntu variant.
Jeremy Bicha
From 9e398b7c29b4b5a32cb8160d242384c4e4e78621 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Jeremy Bicha <jbicha ubuntu com>
Date: Thu, 4 Aug 2011 19:45:50 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] Minor corrections to file manager pages
Corrects a few minor issues in Nautilus & file manager pages
---
gnome-help/C/files-recover.page | 2 +-
gnome-help/C/files-templates.page | 9 +++------
gnome-help/C/files.page | 2 +-
gnome-help/C/hardware-cardreader.page | 4 ++--
gnome-help/C/nautilus-behavior.page | 2 +-
5 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/files-recover.page b/gnome-help/C/files-recover.page
index d1137b3..aedb958 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/files-recover.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/files-recover.page
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
</p></item>
</steps>
-<p>If you deleted the file using <keyseq><key>Shift</key><key>delete</key></keyseq>, or from the command line, the file can't be recovered using this method because it has been permanently deleted.</p>
+<p>If you deleted the file using <keyseq><key>Shift</key><key>Delete</key></keyseq>, or from the command line, the file can't be recovered using this method because it has been permanently deleted.</p>
<p>There are a number of recovery tools available that are sometimes able to recover files that were permanently deleted. They are generally not very easy to use, however. If you accidentally permanently deleted a file, it's probably best to ask for advice on a support forum to see if you can recover it.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/files-templates.page b/gnome-help/C/files-templates.page
index 41ce8a7..60bac5a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/files-templates.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/files-templates.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="files#faq"/>
- <desc>Quickly create new documents from custom file templates (e.g. letterheads and memos).</desc>
+ <desc>Quickly create new documents from custom file templates.</desc>
<revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-03-28" status="stub"/>
<revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-07" status="review"/>
@@ -12,13 +12,10 @@
<name>Anita Reitere</name>
<email>nitalynx gmail com</email>
</credit>
- <license>
- <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
- </license>
-
+ <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
</info>
- <title>Templates for commonly-used types of document</title>
+ <title>Templates for commonly-used document types</title>
<p>If you often create documents based on the same content, you might
benefit from using file templates. A file template can be a document
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/files.page b/gnome-help/C/files.page
index c040731..5cb9529 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/files.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/files.page
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
<link xref="files-delete">delete files</link>,
<link xref="files#backup">backups</link>,
<link xref="files#removable">removable drives</link>...
- </desc>
+ </desc>
<include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
</info>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/hardware-cardreader.page b/gnome-help/C/hardware-cardreader.page
index c445bb5..6df064a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/hardware-cardreader.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/hardware-cardreader.page
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
<title>My media card reader doesn't work</title>
-<p>Many computers contain readers for SD (SecureDigital), MMC (MultiMediaCard), SmartMedia,
+<p>Many computers contain readers for SD (Secure Digital), MMC (MultiMediaCard), SmartMedia,
Memory Stick, CompactFlash, and other storage media cards. These should be automatically
detected and <link xref="disk-partitions">mounted</link>. Here are some
troubleshooting steps if they are not:</p>
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ readers are also available, and are far better supported by Linux.</p>
<figure>
<desc>In the depicted <gui>Computer</gui> window, a correctly-configured card
reader is represented by three drives: <gui>CompactFlash</gui>, <gui>SmartMedia</gui>, and
-<gui>SecureDigital</gui>. Only the SD card is mounted, and
+<gui>Secure Digital</gui>. Only the SD card is mounted, and
is visible in the left column (where it says <em>31 MB F...</em>).</desc>
<media type="image" mime="image/png" src="figures/hardware-cardreader.png"/>
</figure>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/nautilus-behavior.page b/gnome-help/C/nautilus-behavior.page
index f4ab04e..425a605 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/nautilus-behavior.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/nautilus-behavior.page
@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ and the trash behavior. In any file manager window, click
</section>
<section id="executable">
<title>Executable text files</title>
- <p>An executable text file is a file that contains a program that you can run (execute). The <link xref="nautilus-file-properties-permissions#execute">file permissions</link> must also allow for the file to run as a program. The most common are Shell, Python, and Perl scripts. These have extensions .sh, .py, and .pl respectively.</p>
+ <p>An executable text file is a file that contains a program that you can run (execute). The <link xref="nautilus-file-properties-permissions#files">file permissions</link> must also allow for the file to run as a program. The most common are Shell, Python, and Perl scripts. These have extensions .sh, .py, and .pl respectively.</p>
<p>You can select to <gui>Run executable text files when they are opened</gui>, <gui>View executable text files when they are opened</gui> or <gui>Ask each time</gui>. If the last option is selected, a dialog box will appear asking if you wish to run or view the selected text file.</p>
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1.7.5.4
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