Re: Draft release announcement

[Bill Haneman <bill haneman sun com>]

> From: Owen Taylor <otaylor redhat com>
> Date: Fri,  8 Mar 2002 12:34:02 -0500 (EST)
> 
> rsteinke w-link net writes:
> 
> > From: Arnaud Charlet <charlet ACT-Europe FR>
> > >
> > > >  - The ATK library provides a set of interfaces for accessibility.
> > > >    By supporting the ATK interfaces, an application or toolkit can
> > > >    be used such as tools such as screen readers, magnifiers,
> > >
> > >      The sentence above is not correct, but I couldn't guess what the
> > >      correct sentence would be.
> >
> > Maybe "be used by such tools as screen readers, ..."?
> 
> I went with 'with such tools as...'
> 
> Regards,
>                                         Owen

If it's not too late, could we add the words "built in ", as in

"The ATK library provides a set of built-in interfaces for
accessibility."

Or more accurately, we could mention that 

"the GAIL library, available with GNOME 2 or as a separate download, 
provides an implementation of those interfaces for the GTK+ widget set."

Otherwise it looks like API without implementation.

Thanks!

-Bill