[gnome-getting-started-docs] Update gs-get-online for 3.10
- From: Petr Kovář <pmkovar src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [gnome-getting-started-docs] Update gs-get-online for 3.10
- Date: Sat, 9 Nov 2013 19:36:48 +0000 (UTC)
commit e76b56835a0c261dcc3cdda240f46762604fb314
Author: Petr Kovar <pkovar redhat com>
Date: Sat Nov 9 20:36:15 2013 +0100
Update gs-get-online for 3.10
gnome-help/C/gs-get-online.page | 50 +++++++++++++++++++++-----------------
1 files changed, 28 insertions(+), 22 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/gs-get-online.page b/gnome-help/C/gs-get-online.page
index 82d1537..3300a55 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/gs-get-online.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/gs-get-online.page
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
<note style="important">
<p>You can see the status of your network connection on the right-hand
- side of the top bar, next to your name.</p>
+ side of the top bar.</p>
</note>
<section id="going-online-wired">
@@ -33,18 +33,15 @@
<steps>
<item><p>The network connection icon on the right-hand side of the top
- bar shows that you are off-line.</p></item>
- <item><p>Click the network connection icon to show more details about
- the status of your network connection.</p>
+ bar shows that you are off-line.</p>
<p>The off-line status can be caused by a number of reasons: for
example, a network cable has been unplugged, the computer has been set
- to run in <em>airplane mode</em>, or there are no available wireless
- networks in your area.</p></item>
- <item><p>If you want to use a wired connection, just plug in a network
+ to run in <em>airplane mode</em>, or there are no available Wi-Fi
+ networks in your area.</p>
+ <p>If you want to use a wired connection, just plug in a network
cable to go online. The computer will try to set up the network
connection for you automatically.</p>
- </item>
- <item><p>While the computer sets up a network connection for you, the
+ <p>While the computer sets up a network connection for you, the
network connection icon shows three dots.</p></item>
<item><p>Once the network connection has been successfully set up, the
network connection icon changes to the networked computer symbol.</p></item>
@@ -52,25 +49,34 @@
</section>
- <section id="going-online-other">
+ <section id="going-online-wifi">
- <title>Connect to other types of networks</title>
+ <title>Connect to a Wi-Fi network</title>
<media type="image" its:translate="no" src="gs-go-online2.svg" width="100%" />
<steps>
- <item><p>There are various types of network connections that you can use
- with your computer, for example, mobile broadband, or wireless networks.
- </p></item>
- <item><p>Depending on your computer hardware and the networks availability,
- you can choose other connection types by clicking the network connection
- icon on the right-hand side of the top bar and selecting the network
- connection you want to connect to.</p></item>
- </steps>
-
- <media type="image" its:translate="no" src="gs-go-online3.svg" width="100%" />
+ <item><p>To connect to a Wi-Fi (wireless) network, click the status menu at
+ the top right of the screen, and then click <gui>Select Network</gui>.</p>
+ </item>
+ </steps>
+
+ <note style="important">
+ <p>You can only connect to a Wi-Fi network if your computer hardware
+ supports it and you are in an area with Wi-Fi coverage.</p>
+ </note>
+
+ <media type="image" its:translate="no" src="gs-go-online3.svg" width="100%" />
+
+ <steps style="continues">
+ <item><p>From the list of available Wi-Fi networks, select the network you
+ want to connect to, and click <gui>Connect</gui> to confirm.</p>
+ <p>Depending on the network configuration, you may be prompted for network
+ credentials.</p></item>
+ </steps>
+
<!-- FIXME: links to existing wireless/broadband connection documents. -->
-
+
</section>
</page>
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