[gnome-user-docs] Minor updates for 3.10



commit a5f59a8d5d0faa97a50b497bf045147e59c8e3f7
Author: Petr Kovar <pkovar redhat com>
Date:   Sat Nov 9 20:40:52 2013 +0100

    Minor updates for 3.10

 gnome-help/C/gnome-classic.page     |   15 ++++++++-------
 gnome-help/C/shell-apps-open.page   |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page |   12 ++++++------
 3 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/gnome-classic.page b/gnome-help/C/gnome-classic.page
index 45aa86c..b9635cd 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/gnome-classic.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/gnome-classic.page
@@ -19,7 +19,8 @@
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
-    <desc>Consider switching to GNOME Classic if you prefer a more traditional desktop experience.</desc>
+    <desc>Consider switching to GNOME Classic if you prefer a more traditional
+     desktop experience.</desc>
   </info>
 
 <title>What is GNOME Classic?</title>
@@ -32,12 +33,12 @@
  list at the bottom of the screen.</p>
 
 <p>You can use the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Applications</gui> menu on the
- top bar to launch applications. The <em xref="shell-terminology">activities
- overview</em> is available by selecting the <gui>Activities Overview</gui>
- item from the menu.</p>
+ top bar to launch applications. The <em xref="shell-terminology">
+ <gui>Activities</gui> overview</em> is available by selecting the <gui>Activities
+ Overview</gui> item from the menu.</p>
 
-<p>To access the <em xref="shell-terminology">activities overview</em>, you
- can also press the <key xref="keyboard-key-super">Super</key> key.</p>
+<p>To access the <em xref="shell-terminology"><gui>Activities</gui> overview</em>,
+ you can also press the <key xref="keyboard-key-super">Super</key> key.</p>
 
 <section id="gnome-classic-window-list">
 <title>Window list</title>
@@ -113,7 +114,7 @@
       In</gui> button, and select <gui>GNOME</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click <gui>Sign In</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Click the <gui>Sign In</gui> button.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
   
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-open.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-open.page
index 0b8118c..e18d613 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-open.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-open.page
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ icon to choose a window to focus or get new window. Mention middle-click?</p>
   
   <p if:test="platform:gnome-classic">You can start applications from the
   <link xref="shell-terminology"><gui>Applications</gui> menu</link> at the top
-  left of the screen, or you can use the <gui>activities overview</gui> by
+  left of the screen, or you can use the <gui>Activities</gui> overview by
   pressing the <key xref="keyboard-key-super">Super</key> key.</p>
 
   <p>There are several ways of opening an application once you're in the
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page
index 3f64fb3..5f1e7bf 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page
@@ -38,10 +38,10 @@
       <p if:test="!platform:gnome-classic">The <em><gui>Activities</gui>
       overview</em> is the screen that is displayed when you click
       <gui>Activities</gui> at the top left of the screen.</p>
-      <p if:test="platform:gnome-classic">The <em>activities overview</em> is
-      the screen that is displayed when you select <gui>Activities
-      Overview</gui> in the <gui>Applications</gui> menu at the top left of the
-      screen.</p>
+      <p if:test="platform:gnome-classic">The <em><gui>Activities</gui>
+      overview</em> is the screen that is displayed when you select
+      <gui>Activities Overview</gui> in the <gui>Applications</gui> menu at the
+      top left of the screen.</p>
     </item>
     <item if:test="platform:gnome-classic">
       <title>Applications menu</title>
@@ -113,10 +113,10 @@
       <title>Top bar</title>
       <p if:test="!platform:gnome-classic">The <em>top bar</em> is the bar that
       runs along the very top of the screen. The <gui>Activities</gui> link is
-      on one end of the top bar and your username is on the other.</p>
+      on one end of the top bar and the system menu is on the other.</p>
       <p if:test="platform:gnome-classic">The <em>top bar</em> is the bar that
       runs along the very top of the screen. The <gui>Applications</gui> menu
-      is on one end of the top bar and your username is on the other.</p>
+      is on one end of the top bar and the system menu is on the other.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <title>Workspace</title>


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