[seahorse/wip/userdocs: 94/244] help: Mark key-servers-what-are-they for review

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 513151c0bf22500c78a60867159a943660ffcadf
Author: Aruna Sankaranarayanan <arunasank src gnome org>
Date:   Tue Jul 23 10:35:34 2013 -0400

    help: Mark key-servers-what-are-they for review

 help/C/key-servers-what-are-they.page |   36 +++++++++++++++++---------------
 1 files changed, 19 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/key-servers-what-are-they.page b/help/C/key-servers-what-are-they.page
index ba96f00..00f5a2b 100644
--- a/help/C/key-servers-what-are-they.page
+++ b/help/C/key-servers-what-are-they.page
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
-      <name>Aruna</name>
+      <name>Aruna Sankaranarayanan</name>
       <email its:translate="no">aruna evam gmail com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
@@ -22,22 +22,23 @@
 
   <title>Key servers</title>
 
-  <p>Key servers are computers that help you to store and retrieve
-  public keys. When you create a new public key you can
-  choose to submit it to a key server. When you do this, the key server
-  notifies the location of your public key to other key servers. This
-  makes it easier for people to import your public key and use it to
-  encrypt all of their communication with you. You can also import someone's
-  public key if you have certain details about them like their user ID or key
-  ID. There are several key servers present globally, and each of them is
-  equipped with an Internet address(URL) which can be used to submit or import
-  public keys.</p>
-
-  <p><app>Passwords and Keys</app> provides you with an interface to
+  <p>Key servers are storage spaces on the Internet that help you to store and
+  retrieve public keys. When you create a new public key you can choose to
+  submit it to a key server. When you do this, the key server notifies the
+  location of your public key to other key servers. This makes it easier for
+  people to import your public key and use it to encrypt all of their
+  communication with you. You can also import someone's public key if you have
+  certain details about them, like their user ID or key ID. There are several
+  key servers present globally, and each of them is equipped with an Internet
+  address(URL) which can be used to submit or import public keys.</p>
+
+  <p><app>Passwords and Keys</app> provides you an interface to
   <link xref="keys-publish">publish</link> your public keys or to
-  find and <link xref="keys-retrieve-remote">retrieve a remote key</link>. You
-  can also use <app>Passwords and Keys</app> to sync the keys in your keyring
-  so that they are updated when someone modifies them.</p>
+  find and <link xref="keys-retrieve-remote">retrieve a remote key</link>.
+  You can also use <app>Passwords and Keys</app> to sync the keys in your
+  keyring with the key server so that they are updated when someone
+  <link xref="key-signing">signs</link> them or modifies them in some other
+  way.</p>
 
   <list>
     <title>Default key servers on <app>Passwords and Keys</app></title>
@@ -53,7 +54,8 @@
   </list>
 
   <note style="info">
-    <p>You can also add key servers of your choice to <app>Passwords and Keys</app>.</p>
+    <p>You can also add key servers of your choice to
+    <app>Passwords and Keys</app>.</p>
   </note>
 
 </page>