[seahorse/wip/userdocs: 95/244] help: Mark keys-retrieve-remote.page for review.

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 4559c2a99ea359faa27a4444c12e696615ad761b
Author: Aruna Sankaranarayanan <arunasank src gnome org>
Date:   Tue Jul 23 15:51:47 2013 -0400

    help: Mark keys-retrieve-remote.page for review.

 help/C/keys-retrieve-remote.page |   31 ++++++++++++++++++-------------
 1 files changed, 18 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/keys-retrieve-remote.page b/help/C/keys-retrieve-remote.page
index e9199e7..c59136b 100644
--- a/help/C/keys-retrieve-remote.page
+++ b/help/C/keys-retrieve-remote.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="index#pgp-keys"/>
 
     <revision version="0.1" date="2011-10-23" status="stub"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.9" version="0.1" date="2013-06-18" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.9" version="0.1" date="2013-06-18" status="review"/>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -16,16 +16,18 @@
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>Import public keys of those you communicate with.</desc>
+    <desc>Download public keys of those you communicate with from key
+    servers.</desc>
+
   </info>
 
   <title>Retrieve remote keys</title>
 
   <p>You may want to import the <em>Public keys</em> of people you frequently
   communicate with to make it easier to encrypt messages to them.
-  <app>Passwords and Keys</app> helps you to import keys when you have specific
-  information about the key, like its key ID or the name or email address of
-  its owner.</p>
+  <app>Passwords and Keys</app> helps you to import those keys about which you
+  have specific information, like the key ID or the owner's name or email
+  address.</p>
 
   <steps>
     <title>To retrieve a remote key:</title>
@@ -48,19 +50,22 @@
        default.</p>
       </item>
       <item>
-       <p>When you have specified enough information, click
-       <gui style="button">Search</gui>.</p>
+       <p>When you have specified enough information, press the
+       <gui style="button">Search</gui> button.</p>
       </item>
       <item>
        <p>You will be presented a list of keys that are relevant search
-       results. Select the key of your choice from the results and click the
+       results. Select the key of your choice from the results and press the
        <gui style="button">Import</gui> button present on the toolbar to
-       import the key into your keyring or click the
-       <gui style="button">Properties</gui> button to see the properties of
+       import the key into your keyring. You can press the
+       <gui style="button">Properties</gui> button to verify information about
        the key, like the key ID, key fingerprint, level of trust, owner's
-       name, etc. You can also right click on the key and select
-       <gui style="menuitem">Import</gui> or
-       <gui style="menuitem">Properties</gui>.</p>
+       name, etc.</p>
+       <note style="tip">
+         <p>You can also right click on the key and select
+         <gui style="menuitem">Import</gui> or
+         <gui style="menuitem">Properties</gui>.</p>
+       </note>
       </item>
   </steps>