[release-notes/gnome-3-20] more.page - refine the nibbles section

[Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>]

commit 2093da622987c8f7d48f7b9beac4e9c9236e6062
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Fri Mar 11 18:23:08 2016 +0000

    more.page - refine the nibbles section

 help/C/more.page |    9 +++++----
 1 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/more.page b/help/C/more.page
index e6ad0f8..ee471b6 100644
--- a/help/C/more.page
+++ b/help/C/more.page
@@ -139,10 +139,11 @@
   <section id="nibbles">
     <title>Nibbles</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>This game has undergone a major transformation for this release,
-    unveiling new artwork with a fun, retro arcade style. In addition to a
-    "new game" start screen, there is also a new "scores" dialog, and lives are
-    now symbolized with little worm icons.</p>
+    <p>Nibbles has undergone a major transformation for this release! The new
+    version has updated artwork and a fun, retro arcade style, including little
+    worm icons to indicate how many remaining lives you have. The addition of a
+    new game screen and better integration of high scores makes the game more
+    straightforward engaging.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="more">